[Report This]Date: 10/11/2004 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 35 Cherish the Ladies
You know how much I love this! Aw, poor Sherlock and Mary...Ain't it ever gonna go their way? (well, I know it does, but y'know what I mean!) Have you read 'The Game' yet? It's brilliant! Anyway, you have some great chapters here, written with extreme style and a rather enjoyably debonair flare, so I'm hoping for more soon!
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Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying this story! Yes, I read "The Game," and need to re-read it; all of LRK's books need several re-=readings. So do JKR's books! Stick around- more afoot with Holmes and Russell! Blessed be!
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2004 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 35 Cherish the Ladies
You know, it really bites to go to your story and see a 0 in the reviews slot. Thought I would give my bit of opinion here rather than on DC. Why folks aren't reveiwing this wonderful story is a mystery to me. This is such are rich, full tale. It has a good deal more going for it than romance. I like the way you have worked in the Nazi movement and the use of computers and Muggle lit. Very difficult to combine it all into a workable piece, but you have managed to do so brilliantly. This chapter was a bit wanting in the plot area, but I understand why you need to go and fill in what other characters are thinking and feeling. That Hermione and Mary are finding their lives very similiar is interesting. They both have the same problem in the form of two very hard headed men to deal with. I am hoping that the next chapter will be filled with action and loads of romance. Plot, too. Plot is good. I love your plot. I just want longer chapters! Keep it up, woman. You have one panting fan here.
Author's Response: Hello, gotsnape! Thanks for sticking with the story - yes, it grieves me that I just don't seem to get many reviews. The ones I get are from readers like you who know a good fic when they read it! I like complex plots. This one should come to a convoluted (and hopefully satisfying) end. Blessed be!