Highly recommended to read
!!!I definetly agree with blondie girl. I keep thinking- yes! and then- no... This is one of the most engaging, and suspenseful fics I've read. I simply CANNOT wait until the next chapter!
I love how you have portrayed Draco - you've given his character a lot of depth, and the development of his relationship with Hermione is very well done. I am keeping my fingers crossed that he won't hate her when it is all over with.
Wow, just finished the last chapter. You really have me wanting to know if Draco actually heard her or not, or how much he really knows or guesses. Poor Hermione is stuck between a rock and a hard place and I get the feeling she won't get out of there without being scraped up a lot.
I really like this story :) its original :) I hope you update sooN!
I realized I hadn't given a review. I LOVE this story. I like the idea of Hermione having this power to change his life, to open the door back to the wizard world for him. The intimate moments are SCORCHING HOT!!! I want to read about what happens next.. please don't keep us waiting...
really enjoyable! let's get some updates...lol
Cannot wait to see where this is going -great start and a great read.
Author's Response: Thanks! I've got most of the next chapter written, so you should see it soon!
02-24-2007 04:40 Rated 10
I loved it!!!
Author's Response: I am so happy you loved it! This is a first for me; I've never written a story like this before, and I am so immensely proud of it.....
02-23-2007 16:43 Rated 9
would be intresting to see more of this story
Author's Response: You'll get your wish...I just hope I can keep it interesting...I've never posted a story per chapter before...I've always written it out and then posted, so this will be a challenge. So be kind!!!
02-22-2007 10:00
did anyone not notice that he knew exactly who she was and played his Slytherin games yet again on her? he had been playing her all along. she stepped right into it and gave him the total advantage. hermione does not seem too dark to me if her idea of revenge is having the man who would not stoop to touching her in school take advantage of what she offered. she could be much more creative than that. but plz do continue i want more
Author's Response: So you read it THAT way....Sadly, no...Draco wasn't playing her...saying her name at the end was just a flash of something that came back to him from a dream. I happen to think it was the perfect revenge, but then again...I wrote it. I'll add the next chapter soon, I think! Thanks for the review.
02-21-2007 22:39 Rated 10
Rated it according to what I read into it—which may not have been your intention. Hermione got her pound of flesh vengeance (giving a new meaning to the phrase). But vengeance has its price. This is a dark Hermione who is doing more taking advantage than taking vengeance. I think Hermione should experience some dissatisfaction over this. It’s not real vengeance. This is a dark Hermione who has been caught by her attempt at vengeance. There is a good chance she will return. At the end, she is walking into the chaos and dark that could become her life.
Author's Response: What an astute review!! This is a very dark Hermione, taking advantage of her enemy's weakness, and exacting a revenge, while getting more than she bargained for. You read it EXACTLY the way I intended it. And you're right...she's playing with fire and it's going to consume her.
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The minute I posted this as a oneshot, I decided to make it into more. So stay tuned to see what happens next. Thanks for reviewing!!
02-21-2007 18:58 Rated 9
Hmmmm.... That was different. I liked it, but a little confused about Hermione`s revenge. Seemed like they both enjoyed it though.
Author's Response: Well, if I'd explained it as thoroughly as I would have liked, I would have gone over the word limit of the challenge, so I left it to my smart readers to figure out on their own...so draw your own conclusions.