I'm wishing lots of inspiration and opportunity your way in hopes that some of it results in a middle that works for you.
I have to admit my motivations are entirely selfish, but I smell conspiracy lurking behind amnesiac Draco, and conspiracy is just another word for highly addictive narcotic. As is Draco, come to think of it. And the fact that Hermione's lying to him can't be at all good for their fledgling relationship; neither can the other fact that Hermione's clearly not over Ron. *sigh* What're a couple of crazy young kids to do?
Author's Response: I love this review. It made me laugh. I may try to incorporate your line, "I smell conspiracy lurking behind amnesiac Draco" into my story, just because I love your review so much.
I feel bad for all of my readers who are awaiting an update so eagerly. I'm participating in NaNoWriMo right now, so every other story I'm working on has taken a back seat to that, for the month. But I will try very hard to work in an update to this one too.
Oh come on - an up-date, an up-date, please! It's a really nice story, I like your sense of humour, it's sexy, Draco is adorable (can't believe you found a way to credibly dress him in leather pants lol) - can't wait for more!
I've liked this story. :D But isn't Hermione commiting a crime or something, knowing that Draco is alive and not turning him to the Ministry?
I like it!! I really like it...hot..steamy....I think the interaction is fun...frivolous...exactly what I wanted to read....I can't wait for the next installment of the finish!!
I'm really enjoying this story, the plot is unique and interesting and you seem to have a very solid grip on the characters. Excellent work, please keep updating!
Oh, but you can't lose hope, this fic is interesting at every turn! I mean, Draco-turned-amnesiatic-stripper? You don't find bore-free plots for something like that often. Great job!