Aaand...(sorry I feel compelled to better explain myself) Hermione is perfect in this story...she is in canon as is Draco. Thank you again for your story!
I figured after I wrote "so out of canon" you would think..."ohhhh". But honestly every person's idea of in canon is a bit different and I absolutely see pieces of the Hermione and the Draco in your story. That is why I love it. And I never review but after this I was compelled! You are a fantastic writer. Period. And I didn’t mean to startle you out of your thought process!!
My goodness! You must finish this story! I NEVER read stories where the characters are so out of cannon...but this is fabulous! I love the plot and I love the characters as you've transformed them...perfection...PLEASE finish!
Author's Response: Wow... Talk about a slap back to reality. I see now that I have failed miserably in my attempts to keep Hermione in some form of post-war AU canon, as well as show a Memory-Charmed Draco completely humbled by the horrifying starkness of his situation. I mean, yes... I realize that in Canon, Hermione would probably have more morals than she does in my story, but canon Hermione hasn't been through what APoF Hermione has been through... But I didn't think that the characters were SO out of canon.
At least you like it.
I do not envy Hermione for what she went through with Rowle, though I was very happy to see that Hermione was there for her. I am very curious to see if Draco does remember her calling him by his real name rather than Damien in the morning. Great job and I look forward to reading more. ~Krystle Lynne~