[Report This]Date: 02/06/2010 03:47 am Title: Chapter 15 – Paul
I'm reading too, so keep it here please. It's a very good story, and the twins are cute. Your English is very good. Some of the dialogue is kinda awkward, but that will improve, because you are still learning. Overall I think you are well on your way to becoming a great writer. Thanks for writing this.
Alexsandria
Author's Response: Yes, I know some dialogs are awkward and I often write word repeats. I try to work on that problems, but I only had five years of English in school. Thanks for your review!
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2009 06:23 am Title: Chapter 15 – Paul
This story is getting beter and better each time i read it :)
Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: I'm glad that more than one person is reading this story here. Thank you very much for your review!
Date: 08/09/2009 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 15 – Paul
Hello! I just registered with Sycophant Hex, and found your story today. I just love AU tales where Harry becomes part of Severus' family and I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyd what I read today. I find your OCs very interesting and believeable, and I particularly like the twins!
If you are no longer updating this story to this site, would you please let me know where you will be posting the rest of it in the future? I really would like to see what happens next!
Thanks for an enjoyable few hours of reading!
Author's Response: You can find this story (many chapters ahead) on fanfiction(dot)net. I use the same name there. Thank you very much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2009 02:22 am Title: Chapter 15 – Paul
I find this story deligtful, and Iám always sorry that your upload is not freqeunt. But Iám normaly not a reviever because my writing is not that good. Please give us more
Author's Response: It is way to complicated for me to upload here because I need more than three betas to make a chapter ready for this site. Otherwise my chapters got rejected. Therefore I can only update as fast as my last beta is and that is very slow because she betaes for many poeple. :( Thank you very much for your review!
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2009 02:22 am Title: Chapter 15 – Paul
I find this story deligtful, and Iám always sorry that your upload is not freqeunt. But Iám normaly not a reviever because my writing is not that good. Please give us more