Date: 11/17/2009 10:00 pm Title: Chapters 7, 8, and 9
Hestia Jones is the life-line to the outside world, the only protection, the only supplier that they have, and the closest person in Petunia's life now. Again with the WWII experiences. Dudley remember dementors, and probably fears their return even more without his cousin to protect him. And what if the dementors or the Voldy-thing gets Harry?
I like the dream sequence in chapter 7. Sleep is probably the only time when Petunia can relax.
[Report This]Date: 11/03/2009 06:15 pm Title: Chapters 7, 8, and 9
this is quite good, you have given Petunia alot more depth than the average person would credit her with. i think i would like to see alot more reminicing of her and lily and perhaps flash backs would be really cool
GREAT WORK!
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Author's Response: Thank you!! There will be some more reminiscing, and growing on Petunia's part. Well, for all of them, but especially Petunia. I hope you continue to enjoy it!!