It's acceptable. I didn't really understand the concept of it though. What was the general idea of Ron's report. His writing was more 'Professor' than 'Sweet and Silly' and I don't think it's like Ron at all. It shows no admiration for Hermione, as Ron's usual Hermione related texts do, only mindless dribble about ferrets. Sorry to crush your story and all but to channel a character you have to understand them....
Author's Response: Pssh! I wrote this years ago, back when canon wasn't completed. Let's face it, no one really understood the characters then. Truly, the only one who really does still is Rowling. Anyway, it was meant as a humorous one shot. An essay as Ron might write it regarding Hermione that was based on what we knew of them in canon at that time. That you don't like it and had to review to tell me of your disdain is your perrogative, but most write much worse than I do, Isn't that a sad commentary! I haven't even thought of this particular site in a while, so seeing a review for something I even forgot I wrote in my e-mail was quite a surprise. I've moved on with my life, have you?
I could not stop laughing.
hehehehehe... Fabulous!
Dear god, love it
Brilliant job or channelling Ron. Do you plan on making this into a series?
That was excellent! You should do a series of them - they'd be a great read!
I think this is absolutely brilliant! Great idea, but I don't think there was enough death and destruction for Trelawney's least favorite student, but it was still funny, I almost spit coffee all over my laptop so great job!!
Hilarious! A good read, really. It was true to all characters, and I could just picture this happening in the Gryffindor Common room.
Author's Response: Thank you...
The teacher in me can't resist.......as a divination teacher, I would probably give this an F since it lacks true substance in the "subtle art of divination." As a teacher in general, it has the sound of conjecture, combined with unadulterated BS. As a fanfic reader however, I give this an A+. This was truly inspired, quite witty and I laughed my head off! Good show!
Author's Response: Thank you, it's always nice to see that *someone* appreciates my warped sense of humor.