I love your stories, and am rereading them for the umpteenth time. I have found them here and on AFF.net, but many of them are not finished here and on AFF are hard to read due to some coding errors. Do you have your stories complete any where else?
I love this story. Are you going to finish it??? Please please...i see it's been a while since an update which makes me worried. You've made this pairing fascinating to me and i ADORE your albus!! wonderful ten times over !!!!!
hey there! i just wanted to thank u for such an enchanting story.. i have to admit i read it out of shear curiosity about the pairing and i don't regret it at all! wonderfully written and an absolute delight to read
Are you going to continue on this. It's great. I love this Albus you've conjured. And the whole Albus-Hermione dynamic. Excellent. More please. Truly
Hello Max! I have so enjoyed reading this story on so many levels, and am really anxious to see its conclusion. So keen, in fact, that I would be very happy to beta the next part, if that would be helpful? I have done a fair amount of betaing/editing before, and can be called upon to be pedantic about use of English and/or Britishisms if you would like that ;-) Please let me know. PurpleFluffyCat x
I need a happy ending, I love this fic.
Wow! This is such a beautifully written story. You've actually turned me on to the Hr/AD pairing.
Hey there. My name is Or, and I'm from Israel, and I have to say - I was surprised by how much I enjoyed this pairing. I'm normally a AD/MM fan, but Hermione and Albus worked so well for me. I found the story sexy and endearing, I loved it. You kept them in character, and well written. The only thing I had a problem with are the other people around them - Lucius OOC, he turned 'good' too fast, I can't see Harry marrying a brainless tart or thinking just about politics and sports... Dumbledore/Hermione work VERY well, but I do have a problem with some of the background.
Did part of the chapter get cut off? It's great so far!
What a romantic chapter!!! *big sigh*
*sabber sabber sabber*...I need a shower with Albus, too *hrhr*
Very funny...Hermione as a little puppy searching for a tree *giggles*...ok a loo ;-P
Albus and all his woman...my oh my...he needs a strong female hand *ggg*
Wonderful....I love it ;o))
Hey, just wanted to let you know that this chapter appears to be cut off. Other than that, great work!
Thank you! Thak you for a wonder break form the mundane parring of SS/HG. You've made it work, and I hope you finish it. Oh, on a side note, I seem to be confused as to if Albvs is the oldest or youngest.
Author's Response: SS/HG certainly is an interesting pairing. It's probably only that we've got it (at least) once too much ... and in my case: It never was my favourite couple because I don't like Snape much. A man who enjoys to make kids suffer ... no, thank you, I actually can't imagine falling in love with him. Yet I can imagine a girl like Hermione falling in love with an older man - and if this older man looks and sounds like Richard Harris as Dumbledore ... huuuh!
For your confusion: Canon doesn't tell if Albus is the younger or older Dumbledore brother. I decided to make him the younger one in this story.
Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I've been reading this story all day, and I'm totally enthralled! This is absolutely amazing, Max! I've fallen in love with this pairing! *shakes head* Really, I think it rather amusing that Ginny, Hermione, and Tonks all share a single fate: they fell in love with three Slytherin men who, for all their obvious intelligence, are idiots. Again, an absolutely amazing story! I can't wait for more! :)
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Sweetheart, do you realize that chapters 6 and 7 (I believe) are duplicates? So far, though, I'm enjoying the story.
Author's Response: Thanks for telling. I've recognized it - and I've noticed that chapter 8 get lost. I've added it and I hope it will appear the next days.
I truly enjoyed your story. When I saw the pairing, it seemed a little off. But then I read it anyway. Somehow, it seemed to make so much of sense, so I read all thirteen chappies in one sitting, which gave me a seriously numbe butt. *grin* But please please post the next chapter. I want to see what more hell is Hermione going to raise and how poor Albus is going to react.
divdevil
Author's Response: Thank your for this nice review! I know the pairing seems a bit "off", but isn't that just the fun about? I was so tired off reading always the same pairings (SS/HG for example), I simply wanted to try something fresh.
I hope I can post the next chapters soon, but in the moment I'm obviously too productive. Both my beta-readers are working like beavers, but with the amount of stories I produced and with them having a real life too, they need some time to get the beta-ing done. And with English only being my second language, I give my beta-readers a lot of work ...
This Story is great! I usually don't like this pairing, but you make it so believable. I can't wait for your next chapter. Please hurry. K
OK it looks like you got on here now. Good for you! AD/HG is a tough pairing but personality wise it easy to see.
I looked the story up at fanfiction.net and I must say I enjoyed it. There are a lot of grammar & spelling mistakes there but most of them are fixed here so far. I really like the story line. I haven't seen this premise done so well before. I can't wait to read more.
Clare
Author's Response: I can only repeat myself: English isn't my first language. I'm German ... and of course, I got myself a beta reader and she tries to fix the mistakes, but it's probably sometimes hard work.
Anyway: I try to become better - and I hope you'll bear with me.
read this over at AFF...excellent, excellent story...can't wait till you catch the site up...!!!