Reviews For Moments
Reviewer: UnBroken Signed 
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Date: 08/21/2004 05:03 pm Title: Moments
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2004 05:03 pm Title: Moments
holy crap. that was good considering it was just a whole bunch of chapters put together. write more like it! cheers! UnBroken
Reviewer: DDMalfoy Anonymous 
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Date: 08/15/2004 11:24 am Title: Moments
[Report This]Date: 08/15/2004 11:24 am Title: Moments
Who was she mourning for Snape? The idea is good, but its all too rushed. The reader never has enough information to let anything sink in, its just little flashes. The only person I feel sorry for in this story is Lucius, and the quite possibly dead Snape.