Ah, there's Ron. The story is going nicely, I'm rather enjoying it. :) By the way, you had BDSM in the byline for this story, I didn't see that in here.
That was quite nice. Lovely pairing there, a great amount of ineptitude on each's part -- only to be expected, though. :) Didn't the byline say something about Ron?
That was the BEST fanfic I've ever read. Would you allow me to translate it into portuguese, so that friends of mine could read it? I'm sure thay would LOVE to have the same ... pleasure ... I had reading!
Have Ginny join 'em.
Aww. That was so cute and fluffy and romantic. I loved this. :D Well done. (I do think I prefer your dominant!Harry and slut!Hermione, though, from your other fic with Snape in.)
Creams panties. OMG Well the perv in me wants to see Harry Ahem... make love to Ron.
*Grips page* (if there were pages to grip) I am scandalized and hook... MORE MORE MORE... wait isn't that Hermione's line?
Great story. usually sex between yound people of Hermione and Harry's age is clumsy and akward. You made this into a great encounter. I shall keep reading now.
excellent! if you write more (and you SHOULD!) i agree with notsosaintly's idea...yum!
Wow I love this story very cute and funny! I love all the sex too, I think more Ron and Harry action would be awesome!
wow!!! this is hot- you must write more!
I wouldn't mind seeing more added on to this. It's innocence is interesting.
excellent smut, happy me. we need a hermione sandwich here. as in, 2 cocks in 1 pussy = really freaking hot threesome sex.
Now that was the most well written smut I've ever read... Good job. Now to proceed onto the next chapter ;)
That was quite good! More? Yes please!!
Lets get to the Threesome! - next...
Getting good hehee - Ron is soooo bad, but then again we always knew that haha - off to the next chapter!
This is personally the best story on here that I have read yet, I do hope you can continue writing such wonderful stories!
LOVE IT!
Okay, I know you've prolly heard this a thousand times over, but... that is the hottest chapter I have ever read. OH...... MY...... GOD! You know what would be totally awesome (and I'm just throwing ideas.)? Well, I will email you and tell you. Heh, late!
OH God, that part with Ron kissing Harry was so hot, and I'm not even gay. However, if I keep reading these damn slashes between my three favorite characters (R/H, D/H, I have yet to find a D/R) I just may turn to it! Well, not really, but.... anyway, I just have to read the fourth chapter, and then, you must update or I will die. Plain and simple. Die until I'm dead. Aaaanyway, onward! And damn it, I should be in bed, Rrrgggg!
I really like you! Well, the story is developing all to nicely, and I am sad that I only haven't the time to finish this story until tomorrow. OH, fudge it all, I am going to go read the next chapter, can't help it! LOL. Going... going... so gone!
Wow, Jesus! ER, Merlin rather. LOL. Umm, I just can't even begin to describe in words how.. well, talented you are! I mean, I read so many stories where the characters, who are supposed to be virgins, just happen to have the knowledge and skill of porn stars. Yours is so believable, and while I do not like Harry/Hermione pairings (I'm more of a Ron/Hermione believer myself) I just felt myself thinking, "Well, now they just seem like such a smart match." I love this story... I will be back tomorrow night to read more.... just earlier, so I have more time! LOL. 'Til next I read.... heh, late!
I agree with everyone else. Now we need more!
That was priceless. I could actually almost see his face at that question. I love it!