*giggles maniacally*
You, my lady, have just taken one of my sexual fantasies and intertwined it with my favourite book series. And for this, I thank you! For I do not believe my fantasy will come true any time soon.
You are a goddess sent from above b29;
Oooooo! now it's getting JUICY! LOVE this! Thank God there's more! SQUEE!! b29;b29;b29;b29;b29;b29;b29;b29;b29;
its a nice concept but things happen a little too slowly.
but its a good thought, they really should teach us hogwarts kids sex-ed :)
*clap clap clap*
i adore the way hermoine is in this! girl knows what she wants
that was so so good. but i would like to see some more harry ron action
well that was different and to add to the story you could have the next day when they talk about it then have them with hermione at the same time. just a thought
well i can't say i've every read anything like this, unless you count scholarly interests lol. not sure what i think, cause i really don't like ron..... but great writing non the less!
It was one of the best stories I have ever read and i hope you will continue it.
Great hook! All your [versions of the] characters are terribly adorable! "Same to you, but smaller bits, H" -- a classic line. I absolutely have to use that one on someone. Thanks for writing!
good smut very good concept
OMG. You did such a nice job! I would be so nervous about writing this but Im just that perverted that I read them :P The way you wrote this made me nervous, not just the two in the story! This made me laugh so hard it was written so well!
Just... wow. Actually ended up lacking some clothes by the end of the chapter. I've never read any Pottersmut as "effective" as that. Going to hunt down more from you now.
More explorations, a little anal play? Unless your loathe to write that? I know it's not everyones cup of tea, but I quite like it. You could have them both with Hermione at the same time, if you catch my drift, or with each other? Which ever you find more interesting? I'll regardless of which you choose, I'm not that fussy. As long as there's no real bad sado masochism, not really into that!!!
gotta love Ron...MOST ESPECIALLY HARRY ♥ good job Ü do update soon ♥ mimi ♥
hilarious second chapter ♥ loved Ron's reaction though, couldn't help laughing Ü pardon me for not speaking in complete sentences, but that's pro'lly how i am when reviewing, seeing as i'm not much of a reviewer. lol. well, keep up the good work Ü mimi♥
Lovely fic! I love the tension and embarrassment and uncertainty they all show! Definitely realistic! And Ron was absolutely hilarious. I think you captured the canon wonderfully... and damn, was that hot! ;)
great! mouth watering
that was great ladytuesday...
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lol - great chapter.
good chapter
I really enjoyed this. I would have to say that this is '' The Best Harry Potter Slash Story Ever.'' No doubt about it!
You handled the first time so well. You addressed their uncertainties and clumsiness but also portrayed so beautifully how instinct can take over and guide someone. Well done!
Amazing fic.. one of this best ive read in a long time... i like it how it is... but i'll look out for updeates
This has been the best chapter in this four-part (so far at least) miniseries. :) I very much enjoyed reading this and would happily look forward to reading something that continues. As to where it can go from here, perhaps just continue with daily life and sexual interludes? ;) Thanks. :)