13 lines from the bottom you forgot the quotation marks. I'm not being nit-picky, i just happened to notice. BTW i'm really impressed by how solid your writing is (i'm in the process of reading all your fics:]).
Oh that was very funny! What fun and the punch line was great! :) I kind of hoped for a bit more from the pair, but on the whole a lovely fic. I hope you'll continue to write because I'd really like to see more from you. Thanks for sharing with us.
I loved this one of yours. I have read all your other stuff on here. I think you are a really good author. hope to see more.
hahaha, love it. well, apart from the whole harry/hermione thing... but, really really well written. made for very good readage. ; )
i didn't read it yet but, from the summary it sound very good.
*dies laughing*
My goodness, shielding her eyes from his chest... don't they go swimming? I can, however, understand her not wanting to take her sweater off if all she had on under it was a skimpy bra, especially in light of the possible attraction between them!! Oh, I thought she was in her bra, not her blouse!! Doesn't that figure... now she's all wet... Now Hermione's the instigator!! Oops... I thought that Harry gave her the bracelet for Christmas, not her birthday... or is she so dazed from his kisses that she's disoriented? Neville and Ginny??? Very sweet... I am a Hermione/Snape fan; although, despite HBP I think of the guys her age, I like Hermione and Harry!! Thanks, I love your work, which I usually read on Ashwinder...
I'm enjoying this cute story; however, I think that Hermione has gotton Harry and Ron mixed up... She shouldn't be so surprised that Harry so ingenius and she should of course realize that she is safe with him!!!
What will happen now?
Uh-oh... an aphrodisiac!!! Of course Harry would be a gentleman above all else to Hermione!!
Isn't that sweet... Harry taking such care (finally) regarding Hermione's Christmas present and the fact that it obviously has sentimental value to Hermione... is this a hint as to what's to come?
::GiggleGiggleSnort:: Very cute fic.!
cute story
very entertaining! it's always fun when we can pick on the "smart" people!
That was Very funny. I really enjoyed this. I did something similar with my wedding ring. lol. Mind you I was never locked in. ;) Great work I love your stuff.
Ahahaha, that's hilarious...ahahaha You write really well!! Keep writing!! ~Booooooo
Beautiful story. I loved loved loved the last chapter the best. You're a great writer. I hope that you continue to write more! :D Awesome job, and I really look forward to reading more of your work.
Sweet!
Nice start. Can't wait for an update.
I like this already. Anything Harry and Hermione is always an interesting read.