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Reviewer: crazymarie111 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/24/2008 03:33 pm Title: Epilogue

I love this story, now I'm trying to find A Thousand Miles and can only find the first chapter on fanfiction.net. Is it archived elsewhere?

Reviewer: winters Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2006 12:53 am Title: Epilogue

Terrific story. I couldn't help but cry. It was so sad. Now I want to know what happened between "A Thousand Miles" and "Eulogy". You write to well not to bless us with the beauty of how their love story progressed.

Reviewer: Black_lust_z Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/18/2006 07:06 am Title: Epilogue

I don't think I've cried that much for some time. After ready the sequel to this, I decided to read Subsentio. I - I can't really say how much I truly enjoyed this. I know this was posted some time ago, but when I read something posted and age ago and find that I love it - I'm compelled by the Plot Bunny Union to review. Thank you so, SO, much for sharing this heartfelt story. Although it made me cry, for which I should be exacting revenge upon you, it merely shows how well you did as an author. Thank you. *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*

Reviewer: Tatianna Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2006 07:49 pm Title: Epilogue

This was beautifully done. I'll admit that I cried. Blaise definitely became a fully-fleshed, real character to me in such a short time. The epilogue strikes just the right note however; hopeful and full of promise.

Reviewer: Tatianna Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2006 07:32 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Oh my goodness. Poor Blaise! And poor Hermione! You wrote her state of shock beautifully.

Reviewer: Tatianna Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2006 06:43 pm Title: Chapter Eight

This was a great chapter. I especially enjoyed this part: "This was not some fairy tale, and there was no happy ending waiting for an appropriately dramatic moment to arrive." Hermione's growing up and realizing that the adults don't have all the answers. Sometimes you can't just kiss the pain away. This is a rough lesson to learn, particulary when you're a Gryffindor in the midst of a budding romantic relationship with a Slytherin and hiding a huge secret from your best friends.

Reviewer: Tatianna Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2006 06:11 pm Title: Chapter Five

Great insight into Hufflepuff loyalty and Cedric's murder alienating scores of potential Death Eaters.

Reviewer: Tatianna Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2006 06:03 pm Title: Chapter Four

Clever and delightful potions class. I can't wait to see what's brewing inside Blaise.

Reviewer: Tatianna Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2006 05:48 pm Title: Chapter Two

Interesting dynamic between Hermione and Blaise. I'm off to read more!

Reviewer: journeymom Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2006 12:24 am Title: Chapter Four

"Derived mostly from iocane powder, it was not only deadly but also fast-acting, and untraceable when in potion form. " Hah! "You fool! You fell victim to one of the classic blunders! The most famous is never get involved in a land war in Asia, but only slightly less well-known is this: never go in against a Sicilian when death is on the line!"

Author's Response: "Hahaha! Hahaha! Haha-". Thump.

Reviewer: Aldara Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/08/2006 11:11 pm Title: Epilogue

^_^

Reviewer: Miss Misery Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2005 02:21 am Title: Chapter Four

Iocane powder. That's so awesome. It makes me think of 'The Princess Bride.' That movie was my favorite movie when I was a little girl. Cary Elwes was my first celebrity crush. Anyways - it's a great story so far. I'm really enjoying it.

Reviewer: tngirl Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2005 10:54 pm Title: Epilogue

That was a very good and sad story. You did an excellent job of writing it. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: mybebesarecute Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2005 09:54 pm Title: Epilogue

Well wasn't this just a tiny bottle of happiness wrapped up in lots and lots of angsty wrapping paper. Not many fanfictions can make me cry, but I shed one or two tears over this story. Good Job, very well written!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! As unpleasant as it sounds, I'm glad to hear you got a wee bit weepy ;) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Tabby Cat Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2005 03:52 pm Title: Epilogue

Your story is absolutely beautiful, heartbreakingly so. Your characterisations were lovely, and very in keeping with canon, I think. Blaise and Hermione's relationship was exquisite in its short-lived glory, and I love all of the possibilities you left us with in your ending. Thank you for writing this - it is one of the loveliest pieces of fanfiction I've read in a long while!

Reviewer: wood_n_snape Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2005 02:10 pm Title: Epilogue

Out of sadness, hope springs. I loved this fic! Hr/B is great and I loved the subtlty of their relationship as well as the in-character interpretation. I loved how Hermione found comfort in Severus and that happiness will come for her. This was a brill read. Thanks! ~Annie WNS :D~

Reviewer: LariLee Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 05:01 pm Title: Epilogue

Sorry for not reviewing every chapter... I was reading too fast. This was wonderful and poignant. Well done! ~Lisa

Reviewer: LariLee Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2004 04:27 pm Title: Chapter Four

I'm happy chapter clicking, sorry for not reviewing every chapter but this story is so good. I just had to stop to thank you for using a poison based on Iocane powder. William Goldman and S. Morgenstern thank you as well! Kudos! ~Lisa

Reviewer: Eris Anglachel Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2004 12:22 pm Title: Epilogue

I am glad to see this completed. I read the first half of this a while ago, and was caught by the bittersweet intensity of Blaise's fate then. You did a wonderful job of setting up his fall, making all the wonderful characters dance together, watching and yet unable to save him. I enjoyed the subtle play of Snape's role, and her increasing understanding of him. And I loved the end- I think Hermione's right; I don't know whether knowing his fate really couldn't have been changed makes things better, or worse. But it does make it complete, and a wonderful note to end the story on. Also, reading 'A Thousand Miles' enhances this story, just as this one enhances its sequel. Good job, this is one fine piece of writing.

Reviewer: amelia airhead Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2004 06:37 am Title: Epilogue

Good writing, good spelling, good grammar, good story, good characterisations. Thank you very, very much. What a great Hermione you wrote.

Reviewer: Sister Katz Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2004 02:21 pm Title: Epilogue

Beatifully done. Thank you. K

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Date: 10/01/2004 10:50 am Title: Chapter Nine

Hi...thought I'd drop in a much delayed review. I've been reading this over the last couple of days and I think it's great. I'm worried about Blaize, I hope he's OK. I do know that they don't end up together in the end because I've read "A Thousand Miles" which is great and should be continued(hint, hint)! But I still hope Blaize didn't die over the holidays or anything. K

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