[Report This]Date: 02/03/2005 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 9: A weird curse
another brilliant chapter, doll! I'm back here on chapter 9 still.. hehe... i have a bit of catching up to do!
Author's Response: Glad you liked that chapter! Severus is worrying a lot about Professor Burns, eh? ^^
[Report This]Date: 01/30/2005 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 7: Little Green Riding Hood
Hi! I'm very happy to have found your story. It seems to me that I'm reading the official 6th book... you have a very nice style and you handle everything perfectly. Whew.
Also, I like Burns. She's freaky... but she reminds me of my own characters. Nope, she's even more freaky than them. And I'm suspecting what happened in 1945.
The story's really great. And it's good to see that someone kicks Snape's ass! [yeah, that's Gryffindor talking. I'm a Blacker.]
I'm looking forward to next chapters - I favourited this story. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for having read and reviewed! *grinning* ^_____^ I'm glad you favourited my story and like my style! *grinning again* Yes, Professor Burns is freaky. You'll know more about her in the next chapter. I'll post as soon as possible!
Author's Response: *Edit: I have posted the next chapter. Now it must be read and approved by the moderators/administrators of Lumos. So it may take a few days.*
[Report This]Date: 01/21/2005 01:00 am Title: Chapter 8: Lost memories
beautiful chap! brighten up harry....it's not sirius she wanted! can't be...right? lol woohooo. cant wait for update. great work
Author's Response: Maybe Burns wanted Sirius... or not. I won't tell!!! lol Not until chapter 20! hehe! Then, there will be lots of flashbacks to explain how, when, why... (many, many chapters...) Chapter 9 is coming in a few days, as soon as my summary is Beta-read and my chapter approved by the moderators of Lumos.
[Report This]Date: 01/21/2005 12:45 am Title: Chapter 7: Little Green Riding Hood
lol the better to devour you with, my dear! brilliant chapter. you are doing great. i can't wait to move on to chapter eight! i like how hermione is trying to uncover things
Author's Response: I like when Snape and Burns quarrel. And they will continue arguing for a long time! ^^ As for Hermione, she will keep inquiring about Burns. Especially after what happens in chapter 9.
[Report This]Date: 01/21/2005 12:32 am Title: Chapter 6: Meeting in Grimmauld Place
another great chappie...so... two miss know it alls eh? hehehee i noticed snape calling her that. tell me~ did he used to love her? must be... big grins on a job well done
Author's Response: Did he used to love her? Well, more in chapter 9! (yes, I'm evil! I won't reveal anything! *evil laugh*)
[Report This]Date: 01/21/2005 12:19 am Title: Chapter 5: A stormy partnership –– part two
another great chapter, doll! at least she wasnt as mean to sevvie this time... she's spoiled wench isnt she? hehe
Author's Response: Well, Professor Burns is... very, very, very angry at Snape (and consequently at everyone). But Sevvie deserves it... more soon!
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2005 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 4: A stormy partnership –– part one
LOL!! so you're a potions master? that don't impress me much! toooo funny!!!!!! i loved this chapter. good to see sevvie get as good as he gives. woohoooo and i like how she treated harry normally. excellent ofc you have here i'm on chapter four still lol
Author's Response: I pictured that scene when I was driving (and listening to the CD of Shania Twain). I thought the lyrics fitted well to the situation. Glad you liked it!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2005 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 3: A weird creature
another great chapter (katarina is a wench!!! lol ) can't wait to read more. will do that in just a bit. good ole snape! hehe
Author's Response: Snape has found a good adversary in Captain Burns. He'll be mistreated a bit, but he sometimes deserves it... ^^
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2005 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 2: Back to Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place
chapter two is brilliant as well. i feel like i'm reading jkr! hell yeah! i'm quite anxious to see who big brother is! i was thinking is snape, but i am so biased and love snape so much lol. i think it's great the harry isn't the only one left in the dark. that must suck everyone knowing all the time. sneaky vampires! glad marge showed up when she did....
Author's Response: Glad you liked chapter 2! No, Snape is definitely not Big Brother, but I promise you a lot of Snape in that story! ^^ You won't know about Big Brother for a while, but you'll have many other things to think of, I promise. Even my Beta-reader ignores a few things. Yes, I like playing with people's nerves. Am I a bit Slytherin? ^^
[Report This]Date: 01/17/2005 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Dogs, cats and squirrels
hey girl! this is brilliant! excellent story! i'm back here on chapter one still, but i'm gonna be moving on to chapter two in a bit. woohooo i love harry fic so much, i say!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I didn't expect to find new reviews! Now, I'm grinning! ^____^
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2005 10:05 am Title: Chapter 2: Back to Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place
Another interesting chapter. I think Harry's feelings of guilt about the prophecy (and not telling his friends) is very realistic. I found Lupin's lack of knowledge about what's happening to be really surprising - I guess I always expected him to be a major player in the Order. But your interpretation is just as valid. Hope to continue with the rest of the story when I have more time. Best, Sophie
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing! Concerning Lupin's lack of knowledge, I have several reasons: I didn't want Harry to be the only one who didn't know what had happened. As one reader said on another site, it's frustrating to see that The Boy Who Lived is the only one not informed about important facts. I thought it would be interesting if he was not alone in this quest of knowledge. That was the first reason. Concerning the other reasons... well, you'll see!^^
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2005 09:57 am Title: Chapter 1: Dogs, cats and squirrels
An pretty exciting beginning...especially the end of the chapter with the vampires.