[Report This]Date: 05/25/2006 08:09 am Title: Chapter 57: The Emerald’s Heart –– part ten
I've really enjoyed reading this story. I love your character of Kat and it was just so well written ~ maybe you should suggest some of these ideas to JKR herself! Looking forward to the final chapter.
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks a lot for the review and the compliments! ^^ It's very encouraging! ^___^
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2006 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 57: The Emerald’s Heart –– part ten
Wow i cant belive you updated here first. i really loved this chapter. i'm glad that kat & Sev are together.and that kats alright i cant wait for more. how's your thesis going?
Author's Response: Hi! Actually, I've submitted the chapter to Fictionalley shortly before I submitted it here, but I had forgotten that lumos always posted the chapter so quickly. I hope that fictionalley will post it very soon. I don't want the readers to wait longer. ^^ Glad that you loved this chaper! ^^ Hehe... My thesis is going fine, although it requires a lot of work. Correcting and adding new elements to my previous work is exhausting. It took me two weeks to correct 3 pages (which have become 9 pages with my new additions). Just searching quotes in my English books (then French books) and writing them takes many hours. So inserting them in my text and commenting them takes ages... Difficult to find a moment to write something else...
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2006 10:25 am Title: Chapter 57: The Emerald’s Heart –– part ten
brilliant as always. whats you thesis on? good luck with it xxx
Author's Response: Happy that you liked this chapter! ^^ Took me ages to write it. In short (because it's complicated lol), my thesis is on Heroic Fantasy and mythology... Fascinating, but tiring. It gives me big headaches after many hours of work without resting. Sometimes, at the end of the day, I wish I could get rid of all the books I see. LOL. Thanks for the "good luck"! ^^ I'll need it...
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2006 07:42 am Title: Chapter 57: The Emerald’s Heart –– part ten
hey you!! another perfect chapter. Take your time in writing cause we will still be here when you finnish your thesis and i believe your deadline won't wait until you finish the chapter. So, once again, take your time and enjoy. Sometimes i just wander where do you find so much inspiration.
Love, SheWitch
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! ^^ I suppose I'll have to take my time to keep writing my fic. *sigh* My deadline is not until next year (It's still too soon! Oo), but I must send a great part of my work to my professor as soon as possible (Damn, we're almost in June!). *breathe* Oh, and I find my inspiration in my poor aching head... lol I hope it won't explode (at least, not until I finish my different kind of works... lol). *exhausted* See you soon! ^^
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2006 02:42 am Title: Chapter 56: The Emerald’s Heart –– part nine
Good gracious...I had a lot of catching up to do for I spent some months in hospital. How I missed reading your story!!! I still love it and looking forward to the next chapter! You are doing and amazing and wonderful job here!! Three ringing cheers for you!!! Big hugs your way!!!
Author's Response: Hi! Sorry I didn't reply earlier. I don't know what happened, but I completely forgot to reply to the last comments on Lumos. I suppose it happens when you've overwhelmed with work... *blush, blush* Anyway, I'm really sorry to learn that you had to spend some months in hospital. I hope that it was not something too serious, and that you're all right now. Thanks for your review and your encouraging comments! I've finally finished the next chapter, and I've just submitted it.
[Report This]Date: 04/07/2006 09:48 am Title: Chapter 56: The Emerald’s Heart –– part nine
heey sorry for review very lat but i was buzy in school (exams) uknow
anyways im glad that snap and kat finally find happy and glad too for bellatrix death she deserv it
i can wait to read the new chapter i guess it will be all about potter and his friends coz u didnt say anything about them in these last chapters
hope u the best ^_^
Author's Response: Hi! I'm very late to reply to your comment, but I'll reply (sorry I'm so late). Next chapter coming very very soon (I've just submitted it). Yes, there will be some of Harry, Ron, and Hermione in the next chapter (but only a little of them). It will be more focused on Lupin and, of course, Katarina and Severus. ^^ Thanks for your review! I hope you the best too! ^^
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2006 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 56: The Emerald’s Heart –– part nine
yay!!! i about screamed when i read that kat finally trust him again!!! finally a part comes when its not war or battle but just .. love
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! Yes, finally, everything has changed between Severus and Katarina! ^^ More about their new relationship in the next chapter. I have just submitted the next chapter, and when I checked here, I realised I had forgotten to reply to a few comments. *slaps my forehead*
[Report This]Date: 04/04/2006 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 56: The Emerald’s Heart –– part nine
I am really interested in being your beta reader. **blink** just let me know when and with what do i start. :))
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks a lot! ^___^ *grin* For the moment, I'm very, very busy with my work and personal problems, so I find very little time to write (and I'll finish the last two chapters [I think there will be two chapters] of this story with my actual Beta-reader, as it was planned). But when this story is over, I'll keep writing a few chapters when I find time. I don't know how long it will take. Unfortunately, I won't be able to post as regularly as I posted, but I promise this story and these characters "won't die" lol.
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2006 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 56: The Emerald’s Heart –– part nine
Hey!!!! i needed time to notice that you posted cause i was also in my university work. Beautiful chapter... :) I just love it. As for beta reading, what do i have to do to be your beta reader? (blinking with my huge bambi eyes?)
:))
Keep up the good work!!!!!!
love, shewitch
Author's Response: Hi! Glad that you loved the chapter! ^____^ It took me time to write it, since it was really an important chapter with lots of things to say. You want to be my beta-reader? Really? *heart pounding fast* *hope returns* *grins* A beta-reader reads and makes comments about the story (like quoting the mistakes made by the writer and the sentences which don't sound good, and noticing the inconsistencies in the story). It's a way to correct and improve the text. Since I'm not English, it's sometimes difficult to be sure I wrote everything correctly. Anyway, tell me if you're still interested in beta-reading my further works! ^_____^ I have a lot of work to do at University and I won't have a lot of time to write, but I don't want to give my characters up. Imagining the full stop is too difficult...
[Report This]Date: 04/02/2006 04:03 am Title: Chapter 56: The Emerald’s Heart –– part nine
yay they are togeather again your story is fantsatic as always
bryany x
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! ^____^
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2006 09:04 am Title: Chapter 55: The Emerald’s Heart –– part eight
i just got unbeliveable urge to go on line and check if you perhaps posted the sequel. I have to go and prepare my birthday party so i'll just say hi and have a good inspiration once more.
Love, shewitch.
Author's Response: Hi! I'll post the sequel very, very soon! I had to focus on my thesis, so I didn't find time to write on my story (I was so tired that I spent the last two days sleeping). =_=' So I'll post Chapter 56 very soon, even if Chapter 57 is not finished yet. (Don't want to make you wait too long lol). Anyway, happy birthday party, and happy birthday!!!!!!! ^^ :) And thanks for the encouraging comment!!! ^_______^
[Report This]Date: 03/04/2006 11:42 am Title: Chapter 10: The spectacle
I love this character, so deep and complex, and quite the opposite of mine! Although their tempers are certainly matched!!!! I've never seen Snape affraid of anyone or anything, and it kills me to have to scour through these chapters to find out!!! I wanna know now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But, alas, I must continue, or I shall run mad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! As for the dance for Lucius Malfoy, I'd love to do that to him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He's my second fav next to Snape!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And to have both together!!!!!!!!!!!! Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Author's Response: Hi! LOL! Thanks for the review! I love reviews, although these times, it takes me long to reply to them. I'm glad that you like Katarina Burns!!! ^____^ I hope that you'll like the next chapters as well as the first ones!!! ^^
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2006 10:41 am Title: Chapter 55: The Emerald’s Heart –– part eight
my heart is in my mouth im waiting....
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! Please be patient! For once, I had to spend my week on my University works rather than on my fiction. I'll be doing my best to write as fast as I can with both my fic and my thesis...
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2006 07:01 am Title: Chapter 55: The Emerald’s Heart –– part eight
heyyyy!!!
finally!!!!
I love this chapter! It is another great chapter :) And i can't wait for the next one... Soooo... there goes Bellatrix... bye bye.
:)
however, congratulations on another excelent chapter and I wish you a lot more of them, and i'm posting my review as soon as I read it, and anticipating a new chapter.
Just one question:
Interanea Extrahere!” - The Entrail-Expelling Curse… I don't quite understand what does that curse do. can you explain?
thnx for uploading
greets, shewitch
Author's Response: Hi! I'm back after a long week of work (University work, which almost killed me). Glad that you liked this chapter!!! ^___^ (such chapters are exhausting to write). To reply to your question: As it's explained in the Harry Potter Lexicon, the Entrail-Expelling Curse "causes the victim's insides to come out of them" (disgusting!). There was no incantation given, so I created the words from Latin (as usual lol). I really could imagine Bellatrix uttering those kind of spells! Next chapter coming as soon as possible. I've just started working on the last one... (sniff). Spent all my time working on my thesis...
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2006 05:18 am Title: Chapter 55: The Emerald’s Heart –– part eight
Such a sad chapter, poor Severus Bellatrix is so cruel
Still she remains one of my favourite characters in the book =), but so is Severus,
Will there be a next chapter soon? ^_^
Author's Response: Hi! Sorry I didn't reply earlier. Next chapter as soon as possible. It's already written, but I didn't find time to work on the last chapter. Spent all my time working on my thesis (had to). But don't worry, I'm not forgetting the story! ^^
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2006 04:44 am Title: Chapter 54: The Emerald’s Heart –– part seven
it's ok. we'll be patient. And you ARE making a good thing for my finals that last a whole february... :) I'll go and study now. have a god inspiration. :)
Author's Response: Hi! A quick response to say that I've just submitted Chapter 55. ^^ Good luck for your exams!
Author's Response: P.S. Thanks for wishing me a good inspiration! ^^
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2006 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 54: The Emerald’s Heart –– part seven
well, i think you couldbe right, i just wanted to know your oppinion. :)
Good luck for chapter 56, and i am wating for chapter 55. do you perhaps have plans for submitting it soon?
:))))))))
your fan shewitch
Author's Response: No problem. Discussion is good! I wish I could submit Chapter 55 soon but I'm still writing Chapter 56. With the computer problems and a lot of days without sleeping (and my thesis to think of), I had trouble to write. Since there's an awful cliffie at the end of Chapter 55, I can't post it now. I'd have to make you wait very long for Chapter 56, and it would be horrible. Knowing the end of Chapter 55, everyone will ask me "what will happen? Post soon!" And I'll have to reply "sorry, but not before a few weeks. Chapter 56 is not finished." Ewwww... I can't make everyone wait for a week before posting Chapter 56. Anyway, I'll keep writing. Chapter 56 is a scene difficult to write, for a few reasons I can't explain now. *lips sealed* lol
Author's Response: Correction: "I can't make everyone wait for a MONTH before posting Chapter 56". Didn't realise I had written "a week" instead of "a month".
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2006 07:50 am Title: Chapter 54: The Emerald’s Heart –– part seven
hey, oce again, a great chapter... Where do you find those ideas?
:)
i Wanted to ask for your oppinion, I don't get it, Dumbledore said to harry to go to grimauld's place... as he is the secret keeper od headquarters od the order, he told harry where order is, wouldn't bellatrix now know where to look for the order? maybe my thinking is wrong but...
Once again, anticipating for a new chapter, and looking forward to it...
keep with that good job which you are doing, and i really hope you become a writer one day :))
Author's Response: Hi! Well, I think I have a productive imagination, especially when it's about Snape and Burns... ^^ About Dumbledore... well, I hadn't really thought of it. Actually, I think it's a bit different since Harry already knew about Grimmauld Place. I mean... even if Dumbledore is/was the Secret Keeper of the headquarters of the order, it didn't prevent Harry from Flooing to Grimmauld Place once (if I remember well, he flooed there in "The Order of the Phoenix"). So, when Dumbledore told Harry where to floo, it was not reallly like breaking the secret. And actually, he didn't mention the right address, just "Grimmauld Place", which is not exactly the same as "Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place". So no, Bellatrix won't know where the Order is, fortunately. ^^ Again, thanks for the support! ^___^ *big grin* Still working on Chapter 56!
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2006 06:50 am Title: Chapter 54: The Emerald’s Heart –– part seven
Great chapter once again. Loved the part of the imperious curse ^-^
Author's Response: Hi! So enjoyed Malfoy's little kiss with Goyle? LOL I thought the blond bastard deserved a little lesson... in Burns' style of giving lessons! He will remember the humiliation for his whole life I think! ^^ Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 02/03/2006 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 54: The Emerald’s Heart –– part seven
still loving it i actually dreamed about your story last night cant wait for more keep going
Author's Response: Hi! Dreams about my story... ^^ Well, that's cool! ^^ It often happens to me to dream about the Harry Potter universe and these are my best dreams! ^^ Hope yours was good!
[Report This]Date: 01/28/2006 08:06 am Title: Chapter 53: The Emerald’s Heart –– part six
I finally finished reading, you're story's truly amazing! Severus is so sweet ^_^, well sort of. Looking forward to the next chapter and hoping Kat and Severus'll be together again. Then again, that might mean the end of this wonderfull story :(
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for reading and loving my story! (and of course reviewing ^^) I'll submit Chapter 54 in the very next minutes. BTW, the good news is that Chapter 54 is not the last chapter of this story. Normally, there will be 57 chapters! Hope you'll like next chapter! ^^ Cheers! ~Arwen999~
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2006 12:07 am Title: Chapter 53: The Emerald’s Heart –– part six
i so love your story i have been on my computer reading it since 6 o'clock pm and now its 5 am please update soon i cant get enough of it x
Author's Response: Hi! Whaw! A whole night reading my story! I'm flattered! ^^ Next chapter very, very soon! I'll post it right away! *grin*
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2006 08:38 am Title: Chapter 53: The Emerald’s Heart –– part six
hey edina, i know to write it for myself. :))))) I didn't review your storybefore cause i dodn't know do you still read reviews from earlier chapters, so i'm reviewing how. As Edina said, if you publish ANYTHING i'll be the first in the line to buy it cause i just love your writting. I am new on Lumos, i haven't read much but i love your story and i am anticipating sequels. :)
I can't believe that there is someone with such great fantasy who could write these great things.
however, once again, the story is great and i can't wait for a sequel..... come oooooon... what is going to happen? Will burns kick the but of bella in the name of neville? :))) give us a treat of the sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!
once again with great support for the hungry writter, best wishes, SheWitch aka N.
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review! Each time someone posts a comment here, I know it. My inquisitive eye (and E-Mail box lol) warns me that's there's a review. I'm like a starving person warned that there's a piece of chocolate somewhere around. lol I can't miss it! I'm really happy that you like my work so much! ^____^ I'd like to become a writer, so it's very encouraging to know that people love what I write! Next chapter will be very long. A bit hard, probably (I'll explain why in the author notes). But of course, not the end of the story yet! ^^ A lot of Bellatrix, a lot of Burns, a lot of Snape. The end of the battle scenes... I won't say more and keep working on the last scenes! Cheers! ~Arwen999~
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2006 08:08 am Title: Chapter 53: The Emerald’s Heart –– part six
I love your work. A frend of mine told me that she said that she would thefinetly buy your book if you ever publis. Drat, english speling is so dificult when your from the Balkans. Drat, double drat. :)
Author's Response: Hi! I was long to reply, but I had computer troubles. Thanks for the review!!! ^^ Glad to hear that you like my work! *grin*
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2006 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 53: The Emerald’s Heart –– part six
I think you are doing an excellent job. I was hoping Harry and Dumbly would make it out soon. I was getting concerned. onward and upward. Go Kat - get that creep Bella!!!!
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks! Yes, for the moment, Harry and Dumbledore are safe. ^^ As for Burns... well, Bellatrix is very, very powerful. The question is: does Burns get a chance to defeat Bellatrix?