Only one word! WOW Okay, a couple of other words too: In public even! How hot is that?! Lucius on top of ya in the midst of bunch of blindfolded and waiting wizards and witches! Again, WOW
*pouts* what does she have that I don't?! Oh, to be in Leda's place right now. Although perhaps being Leda on her b-day might be better!
She's in love with him? Gods, now I'm in love with him! Is he hot, or what?! Yummy! *goes to next chapter, while jumping with excitement*
oooh goody goody! it's getting better by the chapter! And Ulysses is a total creep *shudders* Okay, next chapter now! *goes to read more*
Oh goody goody!!! This is such a fun read! Lucius is so incredibly hot when he's acting so high and mighty. Hell, he's hot, whatever he does!!! *Imagines to be in Leda's place* I loved the “Oh, bitchin’. Can I do it again?” Can't wait to read more! *goes of to the next chapter*
Awsome story, I took a break halfway through and couldn't stop thinking about what would happen. I loved it.
Great story! Excellent writing! I do wish you hadn't ended it here, though. Now, I'll have to wonder how it ended!
you are a very gifted writer i haven't even written any stories but as a songwriter i can tell
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Brilliant story! It took me so long to read it but when i finished i loved it! Excellent ! xx
Wow, I have just sat for the last three hours and read this from beginning to end. It is fantastic, and is definatley crying out for a sequel...So please when you have finished your original story. Can we have a sequel...can we...please!!
I know you're off to work on an origional novel now, but you know, after the next book is released, and we find out what really happens to Malfoy in Azkaban, this story just screams for a sequal...Leda working with Snape...back with Malfoy...only stronger now. Leda has got to be the best Origional charachter in a fanfic I've read...she's so perfect for this, the interaction through the story of Malfoy and Leda was great...cute even...and I could even sympathise with Malfoy's annoyance at her. Malfoy...scary, but I'm not sure all his nice act was completely an act...he seemed to enjoy Leda, her company and personality and I think he had more affection for her than he let on. So, I'll hope for an eventual sequal. Good luck on your novel!
When I first read this, I thought Malfoy was entirely too nice. Like some other things, this all made sense in the end. I love Leda's whimsical nature...so airy. She reminds me of how I wish I could be...if I didn't have responsibilities and adult stuff to deal with. Just loved the line "It's like you're my dad or somehting"...too funny.
So she's going back to him? Great story.
I'm going through and reading this story again to appriciate it at a slower pace than how I first read it (it sort of gripped me and I rushed through the entire thing). Leda is such an interresting charachter, it's rare to find such good origional charachters in fanfiction. She's well done, has her strengths and weakneses. I find her 'airy' personality very fitting, if annoying at times. This is one of the best Lucius Malfoy stories out there. Good introduction to a good story.
I just read this entire fic in one sitting. I am in daze. It was amazing! I thought, when I first read the summary, that this story wouldn't appeal to me at all. I'm usually much more of a light and fluffy kind of girl. But your characters and your plot ... I just don't know what to say. You said in your author's note that you've gone on to original fiction. Please, when you publish, you need to let me know somehow. You're a wonderful storyteller. Best, Sophie
I'm speechless, It was good
That was awesome!