[Report This]Date: 02/18/2009 08:42 pm Title: The Summer Solstice
you are an extradonary writer and ive stayed up far too late reading this your wit is amazing !
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2008 11:33 am Title: Fate
Also, Carmina Burana: SO Lucius Malfoy.
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2008 11:32 am Title: Fate
Wow, that was such an awesome story! Leda's banter made me laugh so much, and the ending was great. I like endings that are sort of like beginnings too.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2007 02:10 am Title: Fate
This is so good. Congratulations! Leda's irreverence is just the counter point to Lucius's precision. I never thought I would be attracted to LM but NOW I am! Good luck - I think you'd make a wonderful author.
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2007 02:19 am Title: Fate
Oh wow. I loved this fic the whole way through! I'm just sorry I didn't happen upon it soon enough to say that during your writing it. It certainly shows a different side of the wizarding world than readers are used to, and I love Malfoy's completely uncompromising character (though I do wish for Leda that he hadn't been). You have done a great job with originality and spark, and I wish you luck with your new piece.
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2006 10:45 am Title: Fate
Nooo. Why is it over?!:(Please,please write a sequel!I'm so glad she decided to free Malfoy and stay with him(did she?). Great style of writing,wit,goofy character,but all in all-fantastic fan fic.
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2006 09:59 am Title: Leda
Oh noes...Beans is dead :( And the thing is-I still find Malfoy attractive. Let's read the last chapter :D
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2006 07:53 am Title: Interruptions, Part Two
“Couch?” she asked wondering where he wanted her. “Table? Chair? Desk? Bedroom?” Lolol. Poor girl:D “Fine again,” she sighed. “I guess I’ll just have to wait until tomorrow night to fuck your brains out.” “If you keep that up, Leda, you will have to wait much longer than that.” Hahahaha*chokes with laughter* This is just getting better and better. The end of this chapter made me laugh. Good work!
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2006 07:05 am Title: Interruptions, Part One
"Oh yeah," Leda bragged. "He has very expressive eyes. I've had whole conversations with his eyebrows alone." "Well, I adore him, that's for sure. And I'm totally in lust with him. I mean, hello, have you seen him? Me-ow. And sometimes I get the feeling that he and I, that we're. . ." "Yes, Leda?" "Friends. Weird friends, I'll grant you. Friends who fuck each other like feral beasts, but still." Hahaha...that was bloody great :D Altough...I can't believe,from the sounds of things,that she doesn't love him yet. O__o
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2006 05:52 am Title: Casual Conversation
Mary Sue...but not in a bad way. Only sometimes ;)
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2006 05:33 am Title: A Comfortable Routine
Your desk?” Leda asked with a smile as she stood and walked over to said desk. “The Magic Desk?” “Leda, why you insist on calling it that, I cannot fathom. As I have told you, other than its elfish craftsmanship, there is nothing exceptionally magical about my desk.” “I don’t know about that,” she said as she found Malfoy’s missing appointment book. “Every time I get too close to it my underwear disappears. How do you explain that?” LOL. Good one :)
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2006 05:14 am Title: New Beginnings
Witty and charming,as usual. And who wouldn't love Malfoy?Damn,he's gorgeous.
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2006 04:43 am Title: Punishments
This was...amazing.*shocked* My dreams coming true. LOL. Lucius is just perfect in here*drools*Leda is as charming as ever,and I admire your writing skills ;)
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2006 04:06 am Title: The Summer Solstice
Oh my gosh,she's completely obsessed with him. Haha. I'm not suprised at all. This is kind of dark and disturbing,yet sexy. I can't imagine someone being this ensared with a person.Oh,and sex scene had to be longer:P
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2006 02:49 am Title: The Tour
Oh my...*unable to say something coherent*
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2006 01:48 am Title: The First Gift
Haha. That was so incredibly cute. And sexy. *sigh* There's only one thing...I think Mr.Malfoy should be a liitle bit more arrogant and mean. He's obviously not kind to his servants,no matter what. All in all,very well written,I love it*goes to another chapter*
[Report This]Date: 09/09/2006 01:08 am Title: The First Revelation
Ah,this was beautiful!Her coming to Malfoy manor reminded me of Stoker's Dracula. Can't wait to read the rest of your story!
[Report This]Date: 05/29/2006 04:17 am Title: Fate
brilliant i love it, keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 01/14/2006 05:52 pm Title: The Interview
this is THE best lucius malfoy story i have every read!!
[Report This]Date: 01/14/2006 05:51 pm Title: The Interview
this is THE best lucius malfoy story i have every read!!
[Report This]Date: 01/07/2006 06:26 pm Title: The Interview
Thank Lord Voldemort for this story!!!!!. "Leda" is a little jewell oh yes.I think that Lucius has been showed absolutely naked in all senses This is a story that(just like Lucius) captures you and doesn`t let you escape.However I got a question t: did you take inspiration from Evanesce`s music?,after reading Leda I haven`t heard the song "Field of innocence" with the same ears. The end...Ħoh dear Voldemort!..I haven`t decide still if it was happy or not,in some ways I believed that he was a victim but after reading several times I changed my mind...poor Leda!!!!!. I don`t think that Lu wanted her back for evil reasons but anyone knows what could happen with him. But please,if you are thinking to continue this lovely story....please let them be together in the end.pleaseplease. Good luck for your new fiction and please reconsider keep writing about all you want dear because your tallent is absolutely big.
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2005 02:21 am Title: Fate
This story is awesomeness incarnate. A refreshingly creative and original plot, along with witty writing and an engaging heroine. Top marks. My one small criticism would be the ending. This is obviously just personal opinion, but I find that these sort of open endings tend to only work well in short stories, serial works, and the like; with a stand-alone lengthy work that's not purposefully experimental or avant-garde, it's tantamout to cheating the reader out of his well-deserved denoument. However, the overall excellence exhibited here outweighs the flaw in the conclusion.
[Report This]Date: 09/10/2005 09:57 pm Title: Leda
No reviews? I hnestly don't know why. This is a great story (even though Leda gets on my nerves). ^_^
[Report This]Date: 07/15/2005 10:32 pm Title: New Beginnings
Okay, loving the adverb-game here!!!
[Report This]Date: 07/15/2005 10:04 pm Title: Punishments
Oh man, is he cruel or what. Now what would I have to do to get him to do that to me?! Luscious Lucius at his best! WOW again!