[Report This]Date: 05/08/2007 04:02 pm Title: Bedlam within the Ministry
wow. im too stupid to think of anything else.
[Report This]Date: 03/27/2005 07:34 pm Title: Bedlam within the Ministry
I liked the story idea. You have some good moments.
Examples: Uncle Vernon and Dudley at the talbe.
I also found several mistakes. Most of them are very simple things. I will not list them here. I will send them via owl.
[Report This]Date: 03/27/2005 06:48 pm Title: Bedlam within the Ministry
This story was not what I expected , do try harder but nice try for doing a story.
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2005 07:14 pm Title: Bedlam within the Ministry
Wow. what a smashing start. Is there going to be any ships in this fiction? I'd love to see a Harry/Susan.
I hope you update soon.
Treck
Author's Response: Treck, yes, there are going to be a few ships in my story. However, they will just help to guide the plot along. I am sorry to say that in this story Harry and Susan will not get together. I might write a story pairing them another time. Very glad you have enjoyed it thus far. --- Samantha
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2005 10:43 am Title: Bedlam within the Ministry
Hm... a very interesting first chapter, MagicMaker. The many different threads introduced should make for some great reading as they are explored. Great job! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I am so pleased that you are enjoying the story. Yes, I am extremely fond of the open loops of a story. It is one of the first things I noticed about JK’s writing. I will am continuing the story and should close most of the loops before the end of the book. I hope you come back to read more. --- Samantha