[Report This]Date: 04/02/2006 12:46 pm Title: Chapter Six
I'm really enjoying your story and I hope that you will update it.
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2005 06:53 pm Title: Chapter Six
Ooh, Draco's little sexual innuendos make me laugh. I just finished reading the story up to chapter six and I must say it's very interesting and frankly, excellent! I like how you characterize Narcissa's snobbiness with her trying miserably to be polite. Poor Miriel, she has so much to learn. Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 07/23/2005 11:33 am Title: Chapter Six
Um... All I can say is just.... WOW!!! I write some fan-fiction as well, but I've never read a better one!! (Except J.K.Rowling though ;)
[Report This]Date: 05/21/2005 04:25 pm Title: Chapter Six
AH! Very fun! I'd love for you to email me when you update. Do you do that? If you don't you should! gardenerlorett@yahoo.com I'm liking your story quite a bit and am going to add it to my Yahoo Groups fanfiction link. If you'd like to take a peek at our group, here is the link: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/hpthreekeysfanfictiongroup/ I am also writing a Draco/OC character pairing. It's called THE THREE KEYS, currently at AFF, but I think I may just post it here as well. Anyway, hope to hear from you when you update your story. Cheers, Lorett
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2005 12:10 pm Title: Chapter Six
MORE, MORE, WE NEED MORE. This is a great story line and I can't wait to see where you take her next!
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2005 02:21 am Title: Chapter Six
Wow...This story is AWESOME! You're going to update soon, right?
[Report This]Date: 03/21/2005 05:07 pm Title: Chapter Six
More! More! More! I love this story! Please write more! Im not sure what the rating system is here, but this story is a perfect 10!
[Report This]Date: 03/07/2005 08:26 pm Title: Chapter Six
That's awesome! Hee hee hee! I like it. All the.. innuendos are rather funny! Keep up the good work!
[Report This]Date: 03/06/2005 10:33 pm Title: Chapter Six
Enjoying your original character, Miriel, and how you are integrating her into the existing HP framework. Cute touch w/ Lord of the Rings as her favorite book.
[Report This]Date: 03/01/2005 11:36 am Title: Chapter Six
I love the story! It was great i really liked the bit of humour at the end of the story!
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2005 05:05 pm Title: Chapter One
quite enjoying this fic-somehow the Malfoy menreally seem to fit in in the New Orleans setting-most American locations I've found in fictions don't seem to fit as well as this one has. :) Keep going!
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2005 01:38 am Title: Chapter One
I really like your writing and your descriptions. My only problem is that Draco is being more careless than I would expect him to be when talking with Muggles. Other than that, great start!
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2005 04:31 pm Title: Chapter Four
wow, this is great so far... I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
[Report This]Date: 02/16/2005 06:59 am Title: Chapter Four
I like the idea of the Mirror-Mage.
[Report This]Date: 02/09/2005 04:29 pm Title: Chapter Three
I'm curious where the story is going.
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2005 02:23 am Title: Chapter Two
Again, same point of criticism I had with the last chapter. I don't think Draco would risk exposing the wizarding world that easily. But still, the writing is not bad. Don't be discouraged by unfair comments.
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2005 02:10 am Title: Chapter One
Those two reviews are not at all fair! Very courageous to send them off anonymously... Don't be discouraged. I'm not a huge fan of taking the canon characters out of Britain but I think the writing is not bad and it's a good opening. The rest is a matter of personal tastes. I do not think, however, that Draco would so freely talk about the wizarding world, about "Muggles" and "Dark Arts" etc. After all, they are always very careful about exposing the wizarding world. So IMHO you should change that.
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2005 08:08 pm Title: Chapter Two
your still at it??..i thought i told you it sucked...give it up. no talent
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2005 08:05 pm Title: Chapter One
i thought you could have done better...it sucked in my opinion..truth hurts
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2005 01:05 am Title: Chapter One
I can see this story going in a great direction with lots of plot turns. Sounds great, I hope that you continue this fic. Good Luck!!!! I enjoy fics that include the American Wizarding World. Could be one of my new favorites. KimmySue
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2005 01:51 am Title: Chapter Six
lol that was good..continue plz ^_^
[Report This]Date: 07/08/2005 11:44 pm Title: Chapter Six
Great chapter, cant wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2005 03:09 am Title: Chapter Five
You have a great story going here! I hope you keep updating!
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2005 08:52 am Title: Chapter One
Hey, you're over here! Great! I think it's a good idea to post your story in several places, especially when it's an excellent story that should be widely known!