It would have been much better if hemione would have joined them.........or a lest them notice that she was still in there.
This is my first reading of an AD/MM story-much less with the added bonus of SS. It was tenderly written & thoughtful. well done.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :-)
Wow.... Awesome...
This was beautifully written and very well executed. Would we be getting a prequel perhaps of how Snape and Dumbledore came to the conclusion that they would "broach the subject"? Excellent. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yes, you will be getting a prequel, as soon as I can work through what I feel about post-HBP Snape. Thank you again. :-)
I THINK ITS A WONDERFUL STORY BUT WOULDN'T IT BEEN A BIT BETTER IF THEY HAVE SEEN HERMIONE?
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story, but having them see Hermione would have ruined the moment and caused excruciating embarrassment for all concerned, which is not what I wanted the story to be about.
Quite lovely. I'm so glad you were inspired to write this AND post it. Thank you so very much! I hope your muse inspires you to write another erotic story in the near future. You are really quite good at it.
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much for your kind words. Erotic writing is very difficult for me, but "Subtle Communication" does have an erotic second chapter, if you're interested, and "A Marriage Of...?" will have an erotic scene as well. These things take forever to write, though... Thank you again! :)
[sighs] Oh, Dear - I can't count how often I've read this certain story - and you know, I actually don't like threesomes. But this is the famous exception of the rule!
Author's Response: I don't know about "famous", but thank you all the same. ;)
I'd never thought of this threesome, but I thought I'd give it a try based on the quality of your other fics. It was very much up to your par, and expressed the idea extremely well.
Might there be a sequel in the near future?
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words. :) I am planning a prequel, that explores how the relationship began, but I have a few other projects to complete before I can begin.
Wow, that was fantastic! I really loved the tenderness there, much more so than in something strictly PWP. The way Hermione was not shocked or disgusted by the idea of the three making love, but curious. I thought that was very much the intellectual, open minded Hermione, taking the experience as something she could learn from.
I do think that it is more of an R than a PG-13, though.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your thoughtful comments. I'm very glad you liked the story so much. :) Thank you also for pointing out the rating error. I could have sworn I selected "R" when I submitted it, but I obviously forgot to double check. It is now properly rated.
This is nicely written and explores the subject of love in a mature and refreshing way. Truly a pleasure to read!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)