Date: 12/15/2011 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 13 O.W.L.s and Back to Comb Fell
I like how it's going so far and personally can't wait for more of this story to read.
[Report This]Date: 12/26/2010 04:20 am Title: Chapter 1 Introduction
Well, I know it's been almost four years since you last updated, but I really like this story. I do so hope that some day you pull this back off the shelves, dust it off, and go back to working on it, because it's really good!
[Report This]Date: 06/27/2007 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 1 Introduction
This is great! You should write an original novel.
Author's Response: You're so sweet! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 12 Emancipation
Update damnit, update!!!!!!!! I wanna know the rest of the story!!
Author's Response: Yes, yes! Sorry! Writer's block!
[Report This]Date: 06/06/2006 02:59 am Title: Chapter 12 Emancipation
i love this story! I love how this girl renders Severus Snape speechless. Now that is a true talent :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! To tell the truth, this story is the result of all the reviews I got for previous stories: just to show that I'm paying attention!
[Report This]Date: 01/29/2006 06:57 am Title: Chapter 9 Free at Last
Just finished reading the first nine chapters and I can't wait for the rest of the story to come up. Verry well writen and intriguing story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your wonderful review! I'll try to get on it again. Writer's block is terrible...
[Report This]Date: 11/17/2005 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 9 Free at Last
Hey love the story please update really good writer you are : p
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try! Great to hear good reviews like yours!
[Report This]Date: 11/09/2005 10:40 am Title: Chapter 9 Free at Last
Having just read all 9 chapters in one sitting, I am impressed not only by the way you fit canon events into the story, but by the language and customs you have invented.
On a slightly less positive note, I feel as though Snape is not as canon as he should be - he's a man who doesn't get upset at Ministry officials - indeed, the more aggravated he gets, the more waspish his tone. A quieter but more eloquent Snape would have suited Canon better and still fit the story.
Overall it's a marvellous story, and I am really looking forward to an update. Keep the good work a-comin'!
Author's Response: YOu know, I think you're right. It's one of the reasons I avoid including many canon characters in the story: it's so hard to stay in-character. However, the reason I made Snape "loose it" a bit was because of Andrew Drake. Essentially, Snape now has a weak spot because of young Drake and this weak spot makes him act rashly (for his standars, anyway). Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 11/04/2005 12:31 am Title: Chapter 9 Free at Last
I really like this story! I'm always happy to see a new chapter! I'm glad Sanpe is determined to protect her and her father should be shot! I can't wait to see more! Update soon, please!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I shall defianely try to update ASAP.
[Report This]Date: 10/26/2005 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 8 And all comes to light
It's a very original idea, and I like the detail of the culture of the Jrinnu.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I've worked quite a lot on it. Just now I submitted another chapter for the story. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/17/2005 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 7 Increasingly A Target
i want the next chapter up...NOW!!!
lol
Author's Response: Sorry! I know I'm behind. I've had to rewrite to stay canon, and my health has been failing lately. Cross my heart, I'll try to get to it soon!
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2005 12:01 am Title: Chapter 7 Increasingly A Target
I think the story was good but u should've let the girl and snape have some more romance i dont like the ending
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story so far. But it hasn't ended!!! What is happening is that I have to rewrite a couple of parts in the chapter to adapt it to the new book. Really it's not so much changes as reorganizing the order of events. From then the story will continue (with romance!)
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2005 06:52 am Title: Chapter 3 Two People Thinking in the Night
What an orginal concept. I like the way you are drawing your characters and can't wait to see how this will develop.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm really glad you're enjoying it and thanks for writing a review!