This came up at random. Not Shakespeare, but amusing. Thanks for sharing it. You even got me thinking about what sort of charms Aberforth could have used on his goats--- in a family-rated story, mind you!
Ah, Twins birthday on April 1, Voldie as dartboard--and all the rest--I tell you I'm very impressed.
Author's Response: Harmony, thank you for the wonderful review! This was written on a whim at two in the morning on April fools day last year. I know it’s silly, but the twins can always make me smile when I try to write them.
What a clever poem! It's really good!
Author's Response: Thank you! For some reason, I just can't seem to keep the twins quiet. :-)
Hee, I can hear the boys' singing this as I read it. Serious lurve for the poem here.
And I don't think this is bad, as a Weasley by the name of Ron might say, it was 'bloody brilliant'.
~Starry
Author's Response: This was written at about two in the morning, with the mental image of the twins trying to pull every April Fool's day stunt they could. Once I started, I just couldn't stop; their voices do get into ones head. ;-> I'm glad you liked it, StarrySky. Thanks for the review.
very creative!
even i, the greatest poet ever, wouldn't be able to come up with a poem like that!
joking, but seriously. that was awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks Capricorne, I'll gladly bow to the wisdom of the greatest poet ever! ;-> I'm glad you enjoyed it.
wat do u mean you a bad poet? i wouldnt even be able to think of something to rhyme wiht not alone make it interesting and tickle a funny bone or two! you did really well i loved it!! rite more pls!
Author's Response: Thank you! I really did just write it for fun, so I'm glad that I was able to tickle your funny bone along the way.
Wolf Moonshadow... it was irreverent and funny. I loved the fact that Voldemort is a hot commodity... as a dart board.
Author's Response: Thanks Bambu, I admit I'm a hack as a poet, so irreverent was the best I could do, and it just seemed to fit the twins.
I rather enjoyed it actually. True you aren't a poet, but who is now a-days? It was cute, amusing and it did rhyme from time to time. I liked it and am hoping for another little tickle of my funny-bone.
Author's Response: Thanks, dragonsong. I freely admit that I am no poet, but I was aiming more for humor anyway. I'm glad you found it amusing.
hehehehehehehehehe this is hilarious
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Fairy. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
pookah 2007.04.18 - 02:58AM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] This came up at random. Not Shakespeare, but amusing. Thanks for sharing it. You even got me thinking about what sort of charms Aberforth could have used on his goats--- in a family-rated story, mind you!
harmony_bites 2006.05.18 - 05:30AM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] Ah, Twins birthday on April 1, Voldie as dartboard--and all the rest--I tell you I'm very impressed. Author's Response: Harmony, thank you for the wonderful review! This was written on a whim at two in the morning on April fools day last year. I know it’s silly, but the twins can always make me smile when I try to write them.
JesusWillSave 2005.12.03 - 03:57PM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Anonymous [Delete] What a clever poem! It's really good! Author's Response: Thank you! For some reason, I just can't seem to keep the twins quiet. :-)
StarrySky 2005.11.28 - 05:49PM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] Hee, I can hear the boys' singing this as I read it. Serious lurve for the poem here. And I don't think this is bad, as a Weasley by the name of Ron might say, it was 'bloody brilliant'. ~Starry Author's Response: This was written at about two in the morning, with the mental image of the twins trying to pull every April Fool's day stunt they could. Once I started, I just couldn't stop; their voices do get into ones head. ;-> I'm glad you liked it, StarrySky. Thanks for the review.
Capricorne 2005.06.06 - 04:34PM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] very creative! even i, the greatest poet ever, wouldn't be able to come up with a poem like that! joking, but seriously. that was awesome. Author's Response: Thanks Capricorne, I'll gladly bow to the wisdom of the greatest poet ever! ;-> I'm glad you enjoyed it.
meoki_pixie1525 2005.04.29 - 11:22PM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] wat do u mean you a bad poet? i wouldnt even be able to think of something to rhyme wiht not alone make it interesting and tickle a funny bone or two! you did really well i loved it!! rite more pls! Author's Response: Thank you! I really did just write it for fun, so I'm glad that I was able to tickle your funny bone along the way.
Bambu 2005.04.15 - 07:33PM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] Wolf Moonshadow... it was irreverent and funny. I loved the fact that Voldemort is a hot commodity... as a dart board. Author's Response: Thanks Bambu, I admit I'm a hack as a poet, so irreverent was the best I could do, and it just seemed to fit the twins.
dragonsong 2005.04.14 - 02:41AM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] I rather enjoyed it actually. True you aren't a poet, but who is now a-days? It was cute, amusing and it did rhyme from time to time. I liked it and am hoping for another little tickle of my funny-bone. Author's Response: Thanks, dragonsong. I freely admit that I am no poet, but I was aiming more for humor anyway. I'm glad you found it amusing.
fairyp80 2005.04.13 - 07:47PM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] hehehehehehehehehe this is hilarious Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Fairy. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Very funny, indeed! Thanks for good laughs:)
Author's Response: Thank you, Cissy! I find the twins are usually good for a laugh or two.
Hilarious! So funny that I don't care about the slightly odd rhyming XD Heh, Fred and George, so cruel, but we don't care, we love them still ^-^
Author's Response: Thanks, Rosa Spinosissima. Fred and George are among my favorites, they always provide such useful comic relief.
loved it! absolutely great!
fred and george are my fave characteres!
so yet again i must saybrilliant!
Author's Response: Thanks! I find Fred and George to be a lot of fun, they can add comic relief to just about any situation.
Oh, this is absolutely hysterical. I haven't been able to see to type for about five minutes, with mascara running into my eyes and all that. I can definitely see the twins doing, with gusto, every last thing they said in this poem. Best part is the mention of Ginny -- that they're intimidated by (and probably soft-hearted about) her! Well done, Wolf!
Author's Response: Kelandry, thanks for the review. I'm so sorry I made your mascara run, can I blame it on the twins? Any yes, in OOTP I got the impression they were a little intimidated by Ginny.
that was so fun! yay twins poetry!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Niam. I do find the twins fun.