[Report This]Date: 01/22/2008 06:59 pm Title: Foolproof
gosh its soo sad! now im wondering if perhaps they chose someone else for secret keeper they mite still be alive today... but then i remember its all fiction and bad feelings go away...LOL. But it does seem like a V good plan though if only pettigrew weren't such a rat! if you liked this i think you should check out Snegurochka story barmaid... its well good
[Report This]Date: 04/11/2005 04:19 am Title: Foolproof
Interesting! I like your James. But... I thought they didn't tell Remus because Sirius thought he was spying, not because he's a werewolf? No matter! I'm always up for a Sirius-is-kind-of-an-idiot fic. :)
Author's Response: You're right. I'd forgotten all about that. I could go in and edit that, but it doesn't substantially change anything, does it? I mean, I could just take those lines of conversation out all together. I should probably do that, but that's a project for later.
Thanks, for your comments, though!
~Jen
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2005 03:27 pm Title: Foolproof
Great theory! You can really picture the whole scene clearly. Excellent work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
~Jen
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2005 10:22 pm Title: Foolproof
Oh, how sad! I can so easily picture this scene in the books and I can't hardly stand it. Nice job with both James and Sirius. Interesting read!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
~Jen
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2005 01:15 pm Title: Foolproof
That was so sad! It really brought into focus just what Sirius' state of mind must have been when he was thrown into Azkaban. Really well written, it seemed very plausible.
Author's Response: Thank you! I drew a lot of my inspiration from the shack scene in PoA where Sirius was insisting it was his fault and he 'might as well' have killed Harry and James. I was trying to imagine what would lead him to think that (other than the obvious) and I came to the conclusion that this might be how the story would unfold.
~Jen
[Report This]Date: 04/09/2005 06:41 am Title: Foolproof
What a great theory on what happened. I could see Sirius sitting in that chair and almost bouncing up and down with excitment. WELL DONE!
Author's Response: Thank you! That was precisely how I pictured him. Not evil, and not necessarily even careless, but the mastermind of a REALLY bad idea (though he didn't know it was a bad idea, and it seemed like an idea that might actually work!)
~Jen