[Report This]Date: 06/14/2005 06:55 am Title: Ch 5 - Bittersweet Symphony
You know babe, sometimes itsjust great to read a story where everyone doesn't live happily every after. I've always loved your work, there is a gentle, natural flow to your words, the words of a natural born storyteller. I love the way all the characters came together, and yet at the same time fell apart. And the behaviour of the MOD was spot on - the arrogance of man and muggles. I also love the fact that I recognise, know and love all the songs you use, as a fellow Brit! Hoorah! Am so proud of you hon - this was a wonderful story - just one criticism - everything was over so quickly!
[Report This]Date: 05/22/2005 06:56 am Title: Ch 5 - Bittersweet Symphony
I have to say the story flowed very well. I was even late for work because I had to see where you were heading with it!! It was well worth it! I enjoyed how you touched upon everyone involved with side tales... It was awesome how you showed that Death Eaters and the Order could get along when they had to... yet in the end it all went back to how it was. That just shows that enemies can have common enemies between them, yet in the end, it changes nothing. So sad yet true. Moving story... I wonder if Draco and Harry got to be with each other before they perished? I assume that's what happened *sobs here...*, so Im also going to assume they're together in the afterlife. Of course, Severus and Hermione are there as well!! Keep up the great work! -Cerridwen
[Report This]Date: 05/20/2005 02:42 am Title: Ch 5 - Bittersweet Symphony
Sobs! I mean I kinda in the back of my mind knew what was coming, or I mean I had an idea, butI was just hoping it wouldn't, but alas......earwax *wink*. Oh grr, this was wonderful, and like joy said, the friendships, the love, the need, and you keep them in charcter, so kudos on that,too! Just ohhhhh *sobs*
[Report This]Date: 05/20/2005 01:36 am Title: Ch 1 - Don't Panic
Oh my dears, you definitely have me intrigued! Thus far I have not encountered a plot line that is similar, and I really cannot wait until the next chapter,So much that I am saying screw bed time, I must go forth to the next and see what happens. Huggles-nic/lasciviae
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2005 07:30 am Title: Ch 5 - Bittersweet Symphony
Awesome babe! Just awesome! The friendships... the lovers... the end.. awww... Good work love!
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2005 09:04 am Title: Ch 5 - Bittersweet Symphony
I have to say, I didn't think that they would just make nice and go their seperate ways, so this wasn't a shock for me. It was a good ending though.
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2005 09:00 am Title: Ch 4 - Private Universe
Now that's a twist. Luna and Lestrange...
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2005 08:55 am Title: Ch 3 - Shape
I like how you're portraying Harry. It would make sense for him to be such a strong leader. I'm also shocked beyond words that the Dark & Light will be working together. I've never seen that before, and for coming up with something original--you get major points.
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2005 08:54 am Title: Ch 2 - Boys Don't Cry
*IN SHOCK* I've never seen a civil (well that's close to civil) encounter between Harry and Voldemort; now I'm really interested.
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2005 08:53 am Title: Ch 1 - Don't Panic
Good opening chapter, I look forward to seeing where you take this.
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2005 10:31 am Title: Ch 5 - Bittersweet Symphony
Well, damn! I did not like how that went at all. Well written, but I should have not read it! Quite depressing. If that was what you were going for you did a great job!