[Report This]Date: 11/17/2005 06:17 am Title: Godric's Hollow
I have no words to describe how deeply touched I am, this story is beautiful and so so sad. What can i say, you made me cry, that's for sure! Now i can't think about that night when they died, without remembering how Sirius held Harry in his arms...look, now you've done it, i'm in tears again... Thank you for this story!
[Report This]Date: 11/07/2005 10:50 am Title: Godric's Hollow
Gut-wrenching, this is. I have pictured this scene over and over in my mind and there's no way of getting around how dreadfully horrible it was. I can feel Baby Harry snuggling against Sirius as well as I can feel his despair in losing the Potters and everything they meant to him.
[Report This]Date: 08/23/2005 01:47 pm Title: Green-Eyed Monster
Lovely. Dark, but well-written. You did a great job portraying his cynicism and making him real, not perfect.
[Report This]Date: 06/23/2005 02:12 pm Title: Green-Eyed Monster
Very realistic. Most of my fanfic readings show Lily as "the fifth marauder", but the Yoko!Lily version is much more believable. So is Drunken!Rebel!Sirius, as opposed to FreedomFighter!Sirius. Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2005 11:11 pm Title: Green-Eyed Monster
Love your pen name! I agree with your assessment of how resentful the Mauraders would have been about Lily. I think Lily handled Sirius just fine! Love the jab at Petunia too! Nice job!