Nyaha! :) Very funny! :)
Very cute! I was wondering if this was AD/MM or not. I found it on the random stories link. Your hook in the first four chapters is excellent.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for your feedback.
Thanks for leading me here! That's such a sweet, sweet story though I'm once more sympathizing with poor Neville. It's once again a case of "Why it's always me?", isn't it?
Author's Response: Yes, it's always him. But at least this time he wasn't petrified ;-) Thanks for reading.
Hah, this was cute.
I love your language. It's never drab, it's just absolutely beautiful. It flows wonderfully. I love the way you weave your sentences. Wow. Such skill. I'm really going to study your composition, love. You've inspired me.
Author's Response: Thanks for the praise! But it should go to Vocalion, who kindly betaed this little drabble for me.
I inspired you? Good!
I'm laughing! So sweet and funny! I just know Minerva and Albus have something going, even if it's just admiration. But I like your take immensely!
Author's Response: I'm sure there's more than just admiration. Maybe we'll see some of it soon ...
Well done! I like the fact that you focused on the somewhat more mature characters :-) and I really enjoyed your choice of setting.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words.
Congrats on having your first story posted! I hope you'll be writing more soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks aramintasnape! Yes, I think I will try to write more, soon.
very cute, and a wonderful venture into writing. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Very sweet vignette. Having Neville as the 'voyeur' was the 'piece de resistance'.
Hope to read some more of your work soon.
Tinnidawg
Author's Response: Who else would venture into the greenhouse after hours alone? Thanks!
lol.. busted! Neville the spy.. muahahaa.. good story, dear. And, just why did you not share your talent with me? I thought you were a reader, not a writer. Had no idea. Email Potter Place so everyone knows to come read! Please write some more. I enjoyed this.
Author's Response: Thanks, doll. This was my first try on a story - the little plot bunnie was too persistent to ignore.
Wow! This posted in record time! Congratulations on your first story! I like the AD/MM ship, and you presented a very sweet take on it. Sometimes a tender romance is overlooked by readers in favor of lemons, but this how I prefer to read about the characters. Well, maybe not Snape, but this is definitely the best way to write Albus and Minerva. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! The credit for the speedy post goes to you, though!
Not every ship cries for lemons and not every writer should try to write them ...
Very well done. I love the end. I think you should write more.
Author's Response: **Blushes** Thank you very much, triskell. I am glad I wrote something you liked!
Very sweet and with an unexpected twist, good job!
~Lisa
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Lisa! Glad you liked it! ~ apisa_b