[Report This]Date: 04/28/2008 08:07 pm Title: Flight and Fight
One word: Awesome. Yeah thats about as deep as my reviews go XD. A great read and very entertaining.
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2007 01:30 pm Title: Best Foot Forward
probably my most favorite long story ive read on lumos. great stuff! you said you were going to make sequels in epilogue. they are probably great as well. or are going to be great if ure still workin on them
[Report This]Date: 08/30/2006 06:44 pm Title: Flight and Fight
Wonderful story, really :-) I enjoyed reading it --though I do long for more. You've got a nice story here, even if the beginning has something AU (being that the Weasleys never were members of the Order during the first war).
[Report This]Date: 06/20/2006 08:27 am Title: Prologue: Parental Pact
yes the reason james offered up the wedding could of used more thought but the rest of the story was just wonderful.
[Report This]Date: 04/27/2006 09:51 am Title: Flight and Fight
There where one thing i like to know (maby i justed missed it) but what was the last thing about the ring, i don't think i saw that.
[Report This]Date: 04/07/2006 01:44 pm Title: Prologue: Parental Pact
The best storis i have ever read. There is no word for it... brilliant. It cant be told any other way.
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2006 03:36 pm Title: What a Witch Wants
OHH my dear lord. When i first read it i though "finelly" but then he din't ask her at the restaurant, my first though was a loude "nooo" inside my head but you did it better than i ever expekted. BRAVO
[Report This]Date: 03/30/2006 10:50 am Title: Young Love
i really anjoyd your story so did my sister.
[Report This]Date: 03/30/2006 10:43 am Title: What a Witch Wants
this stoey is faceneting and really good .my sister tinks its a wonderful story too .
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2006 07:43 am Title: Deadline
there has to be more....what happend? i hope you continue
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2006 12:31 am Title: Deadline
Yeah. For some reason I've only been able to view up to part 6 for about 3 months now. Don't know how it got stuck. So now I've caught up. Can't wait for the next part! How the heck are they going to get out of this? ~christy
[Report This]Date: 03/16/2006 10:56 pm Title: Deadline
Great twist! Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2006 09:43 pm Title: Birthday Dilemmas
I have to wonder here what posessed the powers that be in 1016 to create a law that makes it too easy (and it can get triggered accidentally!) for their children to die childless.
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2006 09:30 pm Title: Prologue: Parental Pact
Cool story premise, but I don't understand what made the deal binding.
Author's Response: When James and Authur made it out of the Death Eater trap alive, it made the bargain become active or binding. Otherwise, Harry and Ginny wouldn't have been forced into the arranged marriage. It's something to do with the specific words James used in the Bargain.
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2006 08:44 pm Title: What a Witch Wants
great chapter it really sucked me in
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2006 10:24 pm Title: Young Love
Next chapter soon, please! I'm really enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: 02/26/2006 07:52 pm Title: Prologue: Parental Pact
I am literally on pins and needles for you to finish or update this story! It does get a bit sappy at times, but still it’s really good and I want to know how it all turns out!
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2006 12:01 pm Title: Prologue: Parental Pact
I am not quite sure why James offered the proposal, it seems a bit akward. I will keep reading and see how it goes though.
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2006 03:49 am Title: Birthday Dilemmas
So...what would have happened if the unborn child noted in the arrangement had been a boy? James specifically said "daughter"...?
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2006 03:51 pm Title: The Ultimate Domestic Test
I am really enjoying this story, Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2006 07:06 pm Title: The Love of Money
love the story keep it coming
[Report This]Date: 02/10/2006 04:07 am Title: The Receiving of Advice
How is this done? This is a great story. But, that is not a very good ending, I must say. There is too much left unanswered- too much left to explore, unless you have some kind of sequel somewhere. NO offense, I mean it is your story, but if not, that is too disappointing. There was a real storyline there. Christy
[Report This]Date: 12/14/2005 11:52 pm Title: The Receiving of Advice
This is a very interesting story. Humerous! Please keep writing it. ~christy
[Report This]Date: 12/09/2005 11:11 pm Title: The Receiving of Advice
I'm really enjoying this. Can't wait for you to post some more! ~christy
[Report This]Date: 11/30/2005 12:14 am Title: The Receiving of Advice
this story is not complete!!! u need a real ending.. like the wedding and you forgot about harry's proposal! u need something else more. and mayb you could add more things about them at the school. it will only be more fun that way.