oooohhh, i like this story. bella is one of my favorite characters, and i think you definitely characterized her properly. i like the name antares, the story has a plausible explaination, and you don't seem crazy to me! keep the good work. can't wait to read more
Author's Response: So sorry about how long it's taken me to respond! If you're still interested in continuing the story and haven't managed to find it elsewhere, just go to http://e-m-pink.livejournal.com and look for the link to my FF.net page. Because, as you'll find, I did decide I wasn't crazy, and now have about twelve chapters of non-craziness done of the story. Thank you so much for your review - I do hope you mosie on down and finish the rest of it...:)
I was definitely under the impression Harry was Antares...
Oh! My head.
I did like it though. Good writing and all that. I am hoping Antares is Harry, I really am, and this is all some big twisted misunderstanding on my part. (Harry had black hair, right?)
Author's Response: You will see. *Laughs wickedly*
(My first review on sycophant hex EVER!!! Thanks for reviewing)