Reviewer: OriginalityPreferred Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2005 04:36 pm Title: Take Care

Ooo - now this is good. You create that little snippet of life, bring it alive, and then stop suddenly. That's already grabbed my attention, but then that little sentence floating through the next two scenes is great. Good job with the emotions in this one - I like it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :)