omg thats so cute!! i love that story, its class A!! hes so quiet and sweet, ive always loved neville. this just makes him seem even sweeter and so deep. well done for an excellent fic!
Well done! Neville is a great untapped resource, IMO. He has stories that need telling.
Oh, that's so lovely. I just want to give Neville a hug.
I really enjoyed reading this and certainly can't wait for more chapters. Your portrayal of Neville is really great. You show his reluctance, his fears, that he really is good at something. Your descriptions are really well written. It reads much how I would guess Neville would think. Excellent job.
I really enjoyed this.
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:D Great! I don't think of Neville much, but this is original and really good. When you think about it, this is amazingly like Neville and not a thing is out of place. I think it can be the basis for a great story about him, so if you want to give it a shot please tell me because I'd love to read it!