Hello, there! The story is very well-written, truly tasty! Yet, I have one recommendation: being a native speaker in Bulgarian, I have to point out NOBODY whose first language is Bulgarian will ever have the accent you put in Viktor's mouth in English. He sounds more Russian or German or something. Bulgarian speakers have no problem pronouncing the "w"-s correctly. If you would like, you could change his pronunciation into something more feasible by simply replacing the "th"-s with the harder "d"-s. I am told this is the major feature of Bulgarian accent in English, especially British English. Otherwise Bulgarians are known for very succesfully mimicking the vernacular accents of most European languages. Once again, thank you for a wonderful story and sorry for the brief linguistics lecture. :-)
Awwwwww what a sweet story! Tut to Ronald! Poor Hermione, so confused, so filled with need! Brilliantly written Andrian! ^_^
omg! i can't breath! uggb,ygiyiv9g7i.kjh Fabuloso!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! give it one more go, will ya?! elle
mmmm, Viktor. Here's hoping he shows up in book 7 and knocks Ron back into embarassing memoryland.
Just wonderful - that was a perfect story. Viktor is just so damned hot!
Andrian, I simply adore you for writing Viktor, and doing it in such a good way I must say. Can we just forget about certain red-haired boy, which name I can't remember, and let Viktor and Hermione stay together? Viktor or not Ron is simply no match for her, they are too different. But never mind, they can have their romance, then broke up, and let Bulgarian Bonbon have her again. Such a wishful thinking...
Ron who? Let Lav-Lav have Won-Won! Heh! More Viktor, Viktor, Viktor!!!
now we all know what Ron would kill to know for sure! wonderful one-shot!