whoa! not bad! Cool story i have to say, it got my attention!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked. :)
That's awful! How sad for Harry that he obviously wants to marry her, but can't ask her because they've been lying to Ron too long.....
Author's Response: Yes, it's a horrible situation, I agree. Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review!
Again, a very nice one-shot! Well done! I really loved the feel of all the things that are left unsaid; it's a very nice touch in this piece, it gives it a very vivid feel and much depth. "Her tongue is wet, heavy, and alive in his mouth; he can’t breathe. He doesn’t like to breathe." Beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you! This was my first fan fiction piece, so I was a bit nervous putting it out there. That bit that you quoted though is one of my favorite parts. :) Thanks again for reviewing!
I love how this fic turned out! It was an amazing read the first time I saw it, and even fifty reads later, I like it just as much!
Author's Response: thanks love!!! You're the bestest best err... besty mcbest!