I enjoyed this story. It offers unique insight into a canon character who often doesn't get the attention she deserves. I am editing an anthology zine and would like to include this story. Please contact me at spinnersendzine@gmail.com ASAP if you are interested.
Well, I really like it! It's interesting to read angst that isn't so focussed with the, "What should I do," variety. I like it as an exploration of Fleur, who will no doubt feature more in canon and demonstates even there that she's sick of people misjudging her. Although I'm not blessed with beauty, I can imagine that the attention being pretty warrants can be unwanted and make you feel little more than a toy. This was so evident in your piece. Well done.