Oh, Merlin! This is just the most amazing story! I love everything about it. Harry's moment of discovery, his fevered imaginings as the memory replays itself, the conversation/encounter with Hermione... I couldn't love this story any more if I tried. I would be so thrilled to see a sequel!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the nice review! I haven't looked at this story in a long time, actually, and I'm glad people are still reading it. :) I don't have any current plans for a sequel, but if a plot bunny bites me, I'll make sure to post it here first. Thanks again!

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chapter 9

I think this was a superb one-shot! It's a complete shame you didn't get more reviews (yet), because you deserve many! The only thing I found a little off was Ginny's reaction to Harry (the slap) at the beginning. I found it a bit too theatrical and dramatic to be believable. However, the rest, my dear! I always have a lot of respect for authors who can write a whole sex scene without ever using vulgar words. I absolutely loved "he was grasping the velvety length of his cock in his fist", a very sensual image! The sexual tension was everywhere and I really loved the way you described Harry's emotions and reactions. I thought it was dead on! Definitely something I will print, and I hope to read more of you!

Author's Response: Thank you! I agree that Ginny is a bit over dramatic; I don't usually write her, so I'm still trying to get a feel for her character. But thanks so much for reading and reviewing! It made my day. :)