Nice start. I can't wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response: Thank you! More to come soon. ;o) ANL
It was a bit confusing, but at the same time clarifying.
Interesting to say the least ;)
Good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for being my first reviewer! Things will clarify much more as the story moves on! Thank you for coming all the way over to read ;o) ANL