very touching. You've certainly got the scope of tradgedy down pat. Any more of such stories will probably be wonderful>
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm so glad you liked it.
This is a very different approach to "the end". Admittedly it's a bit disjointed, but you work it well. You include everyone, which is nice. And it's well written. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you!
A really well-written conclusion. Rowling would be proud. The ending *will* be painful when it comes. There are going to be characters who don't, in fact, make it and coping with that will be hard for all of the characters. This author has done a really nice job of it and cleaned up a number of loose ends in a clean, decent way that makes the story very readable.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your lovely review! I had such trouble fitting in all the storylines, so I'm very glad it worked for you as a whole.