[Report This]Date: 05/07/2008 10:59 am Title: Illusions of Love
I like how you did this, and especially when she misses the fact that calling him "Won-Won" was probably a major factor in what chilled the relationship on his part. I like her thoughts on Viktor Krum, and on Trelawney, and on how important snogging was in her mind. Poor thing...poor very real girl!
[Report This]Date: 04/02/2006 07:30 pm Title: Illusions of Love
I love this take on Lavender. It rings very true. I always felt sorry for her.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad to know that other people have sympathy towards her - so many people seem to hate her, just for going out with Ron.
[Report This]Date: 03/17/2006 11:02 pm Title: Illusions of Love
I really enjoyed that. Great take on Lavender, especially in the light of (as you said) the fact that everyone seems to hate her. You made it very believeable, and I though the style was great, not too rushed, not too fragmented, but very good indeed. I also liked the thought of Lavender being very good academically, but no-one noticing that because of Hermione being an incredbile student.
So anyway, loved it, the parts fit together very well, great characterisation. Excellent story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the wonderful review! I'm especially glad that you liked the idea of Lavender doing well in classes - most people don't percieve her that way, but there's nothing saying she isn't smart. Plus, it adds to her grudge against Hermione. Glad you liked the style too. =)