Beautiful story! The characterization was entirely believable
I could totally see Hermione being there for Harry when no one else is
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
continue it!
Wonderful story. Very touching, and even thought it's relatively short, it's packed with emotion as well. You did a great job with that. Keep it up. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Great story, I wish there were more! I just found your stories today. I must apologize for not reviewing the others. This isn't really a criticism, as I understand that your style is your own; but you seem to have a knack for cutting off the story just at the point of frustration for the reader! I didn't review the others because some of the endings kept jarring me the wrong way, and I didn't want to be negative. But your stories are so good -- isn't there a way for you to keep your artistic integrity, and still give the reader just a little bit more of a resolution?
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the compliments and the concrit. I am working on trying to write longer stories that perhaps have fuller more satisfying conclusions, which is definitely a weakness of mine, but in some cases, I do like to leave the details to the reader. For example in this story, I wanted to simply explore Harry's experience of being in this magical-like coma and I felt that once he woke up, the story was over, if that makes sense. I'm really glad that you did read all my fics so far, and I'll definitely keep your comments in mind. Thanks!! :)
It was awesome, you should write more of this story!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I think the story is over though, for now, but thanks for reading!
One of the best stories i have ever read, a littel wirde in the begining but you made up for it when it became more clearer. Hopeing VERY much you write a follow up, very talented.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I do think this particular story is over for now, but I'm glad it's compelling. Thanks for reading!
Like oh my god. No seriously I'm like OMG with capital letters. You must make several chapters out of this even if you may or may not have intended it to be a a one shot.
Author's Response: Thank you! Unfortunately this is all the muse was giving me and I feel that this particular story is over. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Oooh! I loved that! I wish there was more!
Author's Response: Thank you! Unfortunately that's the end of that particular story, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Awwww! Now that was a lovely portrayal of true friendship, devotion and love. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Oh god. Wow. Thank you for that. It was so beautiful and well written. Really moving. The characters all rang so true. Is that after Harry's been attacked by a Dementor, I wonder?
It's such a lovely feeling when your discover a writer who really speaks to you.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for taking to time to leave a review and for your kind words! I purposefully left the cause of Harry's current state vague in the fic, so I'll leave it up to your imagination to decide. ;) Thanks so much!!!