This is a very intresting story
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad it wasn't boring.
I've recently , through miserable personal experience, acquired a healthy respect for drabbles. Minimalist I am not, but you managed very well with this downward spiral of the last days; bare bones narrative makes the read more chilling as the count-down progresses. Your little recipe, while entertiaining, gave the reader the intended indigestion. The parting shot, though, Lady Game, was priceless. I'm looking forward to what else you have up your sleeve.
Author's Response: Wow, you're review was really poetic! Anyway, thanks for the comments, and I like your take on the recipe. I've never thought of it as indegestion but it fits nicely.
This piece is so original and creative. I love that Voldemort is put to death by a fusion of muggle/wizarding violence. Draco's death is the most visually stunning. Really wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked Draco - he was one of my favourites too.
I enjoyed the different forms used for each victim and the way you use simple phrases to paint a picture
Author's Response: Thanks indybear, glad you liked it.