Very sexy. Yum yum.
Wow. That was...wow.
This is deffs my fave :p
But just a note: Fred is played by James Phelps, and George by Oliver Phelps. I don't know if it was deliberate that you switched the names around, but just so you know.
But its a fantastic story :)
Author's Response: Mmmm I have no clue what you mean. I didn't switch their names around... as I never mentioned the actors at all. They aren't who I envision when I see Fred and George, and so the actual actors never entered my head nor my story..
AS I SAID ON LUMOS GREAT STORY AND I LOVE HOW YOU TOLD THE STORY FROM HERMIONE EYE'S KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!
Author's Response: Thank you.
I liked it...I like that she is theirs now..no going back...poor Harry! He could have had her!! maybein a different story...love the hairy chests!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Wow, this is great. it must be hard to tell it this well. A true fantasy. cool !
Author's Response: Thanks -- it was actually not as hard to write as one would think.
yes - a great fic. i loved the descriptions of the different characters' drunken ways. also, you kept the standard up all the way through the (very long) sex scene, which is rare and i'm sure hard. extremely good sex scene, too, btw. i liked the glimpses of humour and fragility in the middle - they kept it realistic. =] well done!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Loved it! What a fun fiction. Hermione's attitude was perfect; very in canon. The twins were also to a tee- I especially loved the little argument at the end; I could so picture the twins saying that; we made love! Lovely, funny, great!
Author's Response: Thanks.
GREAT STORY!!!!! HOW DID YOU COME UP WITH THE IDEA?
Author's Response: Errr... It was based on a challenge where someone had to ingest Veratism, I just took the idea and ran with it.
I very much enjoyed your story and writing abilities! Keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Wow... It's fantastic. You should write more about the twins and Hermione. Go on with it.
We're to low on PWP storys. ^^
Author's Response: *blushes* thanks.
Yes Yes Yes! I have never been so turned on by fiction in my life! The Weasley twins are such a hot combo. I need more of the twins...
Author's Response: LOL Thank you.
I've always had a thing for the twins...especially liked how Hermione was cherished, not exploited.
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It's great, it made me so hot!!
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That was by far the best pwp I've ever read. Most of them are straight up 'insert heres' and "oh no!"s and "god"s and "you were oh-so-good-" tastless crap. This is a fine piece of PWP ... with the weasly twins woot.
Author's Response: :o) I'm glad you liked the sex scene.
I doubt that Hermione will be able to walk for a week after all that! It was kind of sweet tho'. The twins aren't nasty or manipulative, even in this situation, and that is good. I think I'd have broken this down into a couple of chapters, maybe breaking where they all left The Leaky Cauldron, but hey, it's your story and it was great.
Author's Response: Yeah, it could've been longer, but I was trying to finish it before the challenge ended.
Glad you liked the story.
quite .....exceptional
Author's Response: Thank you.
Aww a sweet ending and very interesting story. It was the whole Hemione / Fred & George ship that interested me, and although quite detailed, it is a fabulous story!
A.Johnson
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you found the story interesting.
Hmm, too bad this is just a one-shot, it's so good! I don't know why I like Hermione/Fred/George pairings, but I do and this was juicy.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :o)
u ever going to write any thng else with the 3 of them like this????
Author's Response: I really can't say, since I've no idea where the Muse will take me. As it is, this is just a one shot.