Date: 11/23/2009 05:04 pm Title: One-shot
Really good story made me laugh out loud at the end.
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 08:19 pm Title: One-shot
06-01-2007 14:23 Rated 10
Very well written. One of the best stories I read in a long time. I'm glad Hermione didn't forgive him, it's not forgivable! But the dialog throughout was excellent!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 08:19 pm Title: One-shot
06-01-2007 04:57
Well, I'm glad Victor Krum marries Hermione, and that everyone is happy (well, I suppose Severus might be less than giddy), but still, Harry would still be Inarra's (emotional and legal) father or, in other words, her Dad: the one who cared for her and took care of her every need as she was growing up, and who still has legal responsiblities in regards to her.
As Severus said, "there’s more to being a father than an act of sex.” I'm sorry that Harry's paternal relationship seems so easily dismissed in the context of this story, though the last sentence does seem to try to make up for it.
I don't suppose that this was a very easy story to write; all-in-all, you did well with the topic.
Author's Response: I believe you may have misread a segment of this and thought it was a conversation with Severus, when actually it was a conversation with Harry. It is Harry who says 'there's more to being a father...etc.' I had thought that the conversation between Inarra and Harry was enough to show how deeply ALL of her parents loved her, because I couldn't agree more, Harry IS her Dad. I don't think even Severus, with as much as he hates all things Potter, could easily dismiss Harry's role in Inarra's life. :)