[Report This]Date: 11/25/2007 03:57 am Title: Revelations
Great series you have here, I love Ron/Hermione stories! You've got the characterisations down, and I love it that they don't wait too long to get together! Well done!
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 09:19 pm Title: Revelations
03-25-2007 14:18 Rated 10
When I first started reading HP fanfiction, I stated with Ron and Hermione stories. I quickly gave up on them, as I found most to be poorly written. The majority had the same flaw: sex scenes that didn't fit the story line. One minute, Hermione is a shy, trembling virgin, the next she's a sex goddess! I must admit, I was a bit wary when I realized this story was fast turning to sex, but I should have known better than to doubt you! This is a beautifully crafted story; the balance between the romantic and the realistic is perfect. You have a real flair for getting the feeling of a scene just right!
Author's Response: Same story here, for me. This was actually written before I discovered the wonderful world of slash, but I figured it could use a little dusting and a new place to post, so... why not! I'm glad you liked it! :) Thanks for always finding my fics and reviewing! It means so much! :)
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 09:18 pm Title: Revelations
11-03-2007 06:22 Rated 10
That was lovely. I really enjoyed that. It was very believable and written so well. I am a total romantic at heart but I would never admit it, even under penalty of death so this is just the kind of story that feeds my romantic soul. Thanks so much for sharing it.
Jaimie
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! There are two more parts to this story, so stay tuned! The second part is already in the queue! Thanks so much for taking the time to review! :)