It's interesting so far - your style of writing is a breath of fresh air to the fanfiction community. It's almost as if JK herself is writing it. Congratulations, and I look forward to more chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry it took me so long to respond. I have many more chapters written... SH is just a little bit more demanding that MNFF
27-10-2006 11:52 Rated 10
I like this story very much. I hope you will update soon! I think that you are portraying the charcters well, and i can't wait till Harry enters the story.
Author's Response: Thanks! The "Harry" storyline starts in Chapter Two :)
25-10-2006 19:42 Rated 9
Oooh very good. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter Two is on it's way
24-10-2006 18:46
Well begun. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. One minor misspelling: In the fourth paragraph, first sentence, "The dark-haired man lead his companion to the very last house" should be led.
Author's Response: Thank you!
And thanks for catching that. I didn't even realize until you pointed it ou :)