I don't normally like the HP poetry I find here, but I like yours quite a lot. Well done!
Wowwww. I really liked your poem. It was so simple yet it evoked the emotions of immense sadness in such an understated way. I really do love poetry.
It is interesting...do you think he'll really hesitate, that he'll know, without knowing, that his defeat is imminent? I like it.
Interesting take on the "how love will save Harry" question.