[Report This]Date: 11/30/2003 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 11
I loved this. Your writing is, as always, wonderful, with the added bonus of an excellent storyline. Your dialogue is rather quick, you might try slowing that down a bit... And I would love to see a companion piece for Hermione on Lord & Lady Snape!
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2003 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 11
Awwww. That was so wonderful! Just what I needed today. Great job on this-- and if you'd want to write an account of Hermione and Severus' relationship in this particular fic ... well, I certainly wouldn't object. In fact, I'd aid and abet you in any way I could. :)
[Report This]Date: 11/29/2003 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh.... oh. Just oh *long exhale* This was lovely... I love the contrast between Ginny/Harry and Hermione/Sev, all sweet innocent love (building up to steamy sex in the rain) VS groping against walls... both sounds like a lot of fun! *peers rounds Rilla* So... do you have anymore fics hidden up your sleeve? Please?
[Report This]Date: 11/28/2003 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ack! You left it there! But what happens next? *grins* Fabulous job. I'm obviously anxiously awaiting the next part (whenever you have the time/inclination to write it of course) and am really enjoying this!
[Report This]Date: 11/27/2003 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 7
Rilla, Well, I have to say I'm a complete sucker for a good Ginny/Harry and this is one of the best I've read. I like how you have Harry chasing Ginny for once and the Snape/Hermione aspect is great! Especially Hermione's description of how she feels when she kisses him. *sighs* Poor Remus though, will there be anyone for him? Anyway, fabulous job and I'm looking forward to seeing how it ends!
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2003 10:05 am Title: Chapter 4
Please don't let him use one of the lines, please. On second thoughts do... the comic episode could be hilarious! Poor Harry. he really hasn't got a clue has he? Ah well. His pain is our pleasure!
[Report This]Date: 11/25/2003 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is hilarious! I loved Fred and George's script. Hermione as sex kitten is pretty hilarious too. Can't wait for more ;)