Great story. Gooey Snapes usually make me cringe, but you played him great, and the unconventional :) Hermione suited him so well. Also, the chapter length is a stroke of genius- it made reading much, much more pleasant. When chapters are long on a computer screen I lose track... Anyway. I just spent a great hour. Thanks!
This story is wonderful. I really like your plot and your style. Nice one.
at the start of chapter 7 you spelt ward instad of word
Gorgeous, loved it. Had to supress a laugh at the whole 'No, it's not right in your office, on a desk, let's do it in bed, that's conventional.' And then they ended up in a field. In the rain XD Scrumptious idea though. All so cute, poor Snape, I can't decide if it's sweet or pathetic ^.^
absolutely good.... ginny and harry are like an item from the start of thre second book of jkr's books...
That was an exallent story I enjoyed it very much thankes
wow noce date !!!!!^_^
ginny is very brave!!!
llooll wt happened to harry so funny!!!^_^
wt harry was thinking of !!!!!!!!!!!!!
he he he he fred a George are funny
nice story but if harry liked ginny y he marreid hermione!!!!
Like it was meant to be, spectacularly involving read and just as I had hoped!
It was ... interesting. I have to wonder where it's supposed to be going. It kind of just ... ended. Interesting. Diva
I LOVE IT! I really hope Ginny ends up with Harry in the end of the series that would be cool, and Ron with Hermione. Wouldn't that be cool?
?Hey Ginny!? Fred was standing at the top of the stairs. ?Harry?s out of the shower now, mum wants you to take some fresh towels up for her.? Shouldn't that last word in the sentence be HIM?
awsome.. .lots of sex
sucks.. no sex at all
nice story keep on writing. love nintschi
I really enjoyed this story. Good blend of romance and humor.
Rilla! I didn't know you had a hp/gw fic too! They were my first ship, till I sailed the hg/ss ship. I really liked that. It was sweet, and I LOVED the ending. In the rain. *sigh* I thought the Seinfeld reference was funny, as I was semi-watching that same episode earlier today!! Cracked me up. Shrinkage? As in laundry?? (Elaine) Love your writing...
Great fic - loved the idea that Harry was only married to Hermione for six months and that she was trying to play Remus against Severus - now there's a great plot bunny. Terrific as always Rilla - thanks.