I have just very greedily read this story from start to finish ... it was so compelling and lovely and stirring I ripped through it as fast as I could. 

 Your characterisation was brilliant.  Sirius and Zen are a great couple, she is a wonderful OC for him.  I thought the sex scenes were really tasteful but still erotic.  It was a really original take ... which would lead nicely into a sequel *hint hint* hehe.

Fluffy, romantic, funny, sexy ... perfect!  Well done you!

So much to say. First of all, the ending is very satisfying in that it’s somewhat realistic in tone that the future is not going to perfect or easy. It’s happy but not saccharine-sweet. Bittersweet, like everything you write. I was rereading the whole thing, and I really like the way you wrote their fight. Do you really have the reflexes of a Seeker? And I still can’t believe she forgave him about the rats. It was bad enough that he left them where she’d find them, but to actually toss one to her? Ick. No wonder she hit him with it. I don’t think I’d ever forgive him! Saying that he was a magician who wanted to change careers – priceless! Sirius waking up and thinking the cat’s purr was a motorcycle engine – hilarious! A major question: you started this story many months before the release of Book 7. How did you know that Snape wasn’t going to survive? And most importantly: are there going to be any sequels? Like maybe Sirius adjusting to life as a Muggle, or Sirius and Zen helping Snape adjust to life in their world?

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments. Yes, he was very childing with his "revenge", and she was very angry. And I had thought it was pretty obvious that old Severus wouldn't survive. Plus, if he had, his life would have been miserable. And yes, there will probably be some sequels... but not during the semester!