[Report This]Date: 11/27/2007 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
hmmm... gosh well as you know i think the beginning was amazing and i do like the ending but i feel its missing something... i think perhaps another chapter or two before the last to show more of a run up and the plotting of the resistance and gillert would have been nice.
i hope you dont find this criticism too harsh.
i really look forward to more of your writing and if i get round to writing anything i hope you'll look at my stuff! LOL =]
Author's Response: I don't mind at all, I appreciate that you took the time to express your opinion of my writing. I do tend to be concise - I like to stick to the highlights. I wanted to write the story of the famous duel, so I could have just done Chapter 3. But even I felt that was too little. :D
[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 03:32 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW!!! I well proper liked this you certainly have gotten a talent and i seriously hope your spending every waking hour writing the rest of this!!!
PS. Loved the whole romance bit at the beginning! LOL
Author's Response: Hi Bazman5000!
I'm glad you liked my first chapter, especially the romance part. I have never written anything like that before. The whole story is a departure for me, actually, I am a huge Snape fan and mostly write stuff for the Occlumency archive.
Anyway, FYTI the story is done and you can read the rest of it!