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Reviewer: pookah Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1

I am amazed by this. You've done a wonderful job, I imagine, of portraying Dudley. I say I imagine because I really never did anything I needed to repent of that much, no beatings up and teasing others. So I can on;y imagine. But I think you have imagined it really well. It's very readable. I'm really eager for more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. It's interesting, trying to figure out how Dudley would have reacted to Harry and his childhood. Thanks for your review

Reviewer: pookah Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2008 12:33 am Title: Prologue

This is really neat. I can't help but believe that Harry will return to make his peace with the Dursleys. And Dudley may be the most hopeful of the bunch from what we saw in DH. Wonderful beginning. *skips happily off to the second chapter!*

Author's Response: Thanks; I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Overhill Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2008 11:20 pm Title: Prologue

I like the idea of Harry coming back to check on the family; it fits his personality, and for all the growing he did emotionally. I mean, he called on Voldy to have some remorse, giving him a last chance - I'm sure that there would still be room in his heart for Duddley, as he showed that he did care at the last.

Author's Response: I can't imagine Harry not going back to check on them, or giving Dudley another chance. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: yolen Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2008 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic story. Can't wait to see more.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: pragerr Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/23/2008 01:28 am Title: Chapter 1

I had no idea what to expect, but really enjoyed reading this. I'm not much of a writer, so take any comments with a LARGE grain of salt, but you've managed to capture the flavor of the characters very well. I still don't know where you've taken Draco -- hope to find out in Chapter 2! Very nice job!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm taking Draco several different places. ;-)

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