Reviewer: Myene Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/2008 06:05 pm Title: One-shot.

sweet story. you forgot to take out one of yoru editing marks, "“You saved my boy.” She lets go and remembers her vision. “And helped him become a man.” Who says this? Lily? If so, move it up to the paragraph above." Its under #6.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh how embarrassing! I fixed it, though -- it's posted in 4 archives, too. *blushes* Thanks so much for your help and for your review! :-D